This isn't entirely my work. This story was started by kiddi. He wrote the first 4 chapters. He feels he can't continue and has given me permission to continue it.
Naruto Uzumaki is lost to Konoha when he vanishes durring an attack on his life. He winds up in the magical land of Equestria in under the care of a certain Zebra. But this is only the beggining as much larger things are in story for are young traveler. Watch as he grows and faces numerous challenges caused by his past and his future.
Chapters (7)
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In the original story, kiddi put "Ryhmes" in the title. as far as I know it's never been changed there, so I kept it here. I have no idea why he put it like that though. If it were a simple typo he probably would have fixed it, by now. It's been around a while after all.
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It's fine. I reacted the same way at first. But now, to me anyway, it's one of those fun quirks that never gets old.
2802197 It's also going to keep people from reading your story because they assume if you can't even spell the title right, the story itself isn't worth reading.
Is the romance between Naruro and Twilight still gonna be in this story or are you turning this into a harem?
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It's a good thing I do this for fun rather than fame then, isn't it. Don't get me wrong, I love entertaining others. Every writer/artist/performer does. But I've learned it's more satisfying to do things my way, and let the others react as they will.
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I don't think I'll be doing a harem (I always get very uncomfortable when I try to write those). Hm, I do need to work in some romance soon though, or I'll make a liar of myself.
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So I'm guessing the romance will still be between Naruto and Twilight then?
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Yes, It will.
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...Okay! Following this story now!
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Thanks
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No one ever pointed out the mistake to me. Next issue, spaceing. Make sure there is a full line of space between the paragraphs or else it looks like a wall of text.
Hmm, this is interesting... I'll be following this if you don't mind.
WOHOO THIS IS GETTING CONTINUED!!!'n
at what point in Naruto storyline is this at is after sage training or when he and Kurama are buddy buddy?
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Neither, This is an entirely different time line. You... didn't read the first 4 chapters at all, did you?
not yet was gonna read later tonight just wanted a idea of where naruto was at this point, thank you for the response though
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He's still just a child/foal/whatever you call a young fox.
As far as species goes, it's gotten complicated.
Sorry for putting you on the spot there
I should've worded my question more politely.
a baby fox is called a Kit, i know a lot about foxes
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Thank You!
That sounds cool to say. Kit, kIt,kiT,KIT,kit.
DAYUM! Great story, hope to see more of this coming soon, keep goin and stay golden^^
SO WAY OUT THERE THAT I CAN'T EVEN!
Are Twi and Naruto immortal because they are Alicorn-ish and have absorbed all of the chakra of an immortal entity?
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Immortal as in: can never die- no
immortal as in: aren't effected by the ravages of time and difficult to kill by virtue of their
powers- yes
2811872 ok thanks for the info
And so... The legend contunies, By the time they reach Episode 1 they will be EPIC!
are you going to create your Fanfiction.net account to also continue the story there like Kiddi did?
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I have a fanfiction.net account already. I'll see about putting this up there when I get the chance.
Each chapter just progressively puts me closer to the edge of my seat, eventually i'll have fallen of the seat and glued my face to the screen. Very well done and exceptionally well written minus the few grammatical mistakes.
amazing story so far. just read all the chapters and I must say I bloody well love it. please keep up the good work and please release the next chapter soon....and the one after that, and the one after that, and the one after that, and the one after that, but not the one after that...that chapter leaves a bad taste...but the one after that makes up for it
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Thanks guys! But please understand this is a more complicated story than I'm used to (first time working with an anime series). Writing this is going to be slow and hard. I'll try to make up for it with story lengh and exceptional content though.
interesting fic, i like it
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Thanks!
Looks like they have so much to learn before they head off to Ponyville in the years to come. By the way, when is Spike going to join the family?
Where is Bushy Brow when you need him most.
waited for the last guy to put out a new part.......glad to see it continuing.
Well I'm glad to see this continuing, hope it keeps my attention like its predecessor. Though I am curious, as they both have fox tails, will they grow more as their power grows? Thanks for continuing this story!
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Sorry, Spike isn't coming in anytime soon. How can I justify sending both Naruto and Twilight to ponyville if she already has an assisstant? He'll be there, but he comes in later.
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Training with his adopted father.
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Thanks for the support.
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I haven't worked out all the kinks in demonic power yet. Thanks for the support. I'll try to live up to the standard.
yeah! an update!
Loving the update, especially with the developmental content. But I highly suggest getting a proofreader, there are a multitude of mistakes dotting this chapter as well as the ones prior. Nothing outrageous mind you, but the grammar and punctuation could use some work. Other than that, I hope to see more updates in the future.
Update more! You need to update more! This story is amazing!
More updates please!
needs to be a bit longer and KINDA feels a LITTLE rushed bit still good
Sooner or later they will meet the other ponies.
3065874 Amazing isn't the right word maybe illegally super-awesome!
LET THE BLOODSHED BEGIN!
If there is one thing I wish was in this chapter that wasn't it would be everyone's reaction to the transformation jutsu/spell, or rather how they went from barely being able to hold it for like five seconds to being able to hold it near indefinitely practically over night. Not to mention the fact that Celestia had never seen them use it before unlike the parents, Cadence, and Shiny.
Okay, they are alicorns, both are the most powerful magic/chakra users ever, and they have the nine tail's power. Can't wait for the elements to be added to the list of OP awesomeness.
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The Elements of Harmony, or the Elemental Chakra Natures?