This is the story of a wanderer who took up residence in Diese some time ago; there are many wanderers and many like him, their stories litter the wastelands as unmarked graves. He intends to reclaim that which he lost and find fame, fortune, and loot along the way. However, will this wanderer find what he seeks or will he only find the bottom of a shallow grave, like so many before him?
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Welcome to the family! (Will read later: World of Tanking)
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Thanks, hope you enjoy it.
One more FoE fic to put on the list.
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its on the list for 3 for of the FOE groups actually
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I am going to read all FoE stories this fandome have.
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im pretty much right along with you on that one. m up to the most recent chapters (and waiting for updates) of Project Horizons, Memories, Last Sentinel and New Pegas. im up to chapter 16 in Heroes, and chapter 3 in Murky Number Seven. i finished Pink Eyes, already and will be starting Last Wanderer and All That Remains this week
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Have read the original and Pink Eyes and Heroes with wings (Silvers POV)
I am up to date on PH and on chapter 19 on Heroes. When I am done with Heroes I will start on Murky Number Seven and continue from there.
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i have to pick back up on murky number 7. i got distracted by heroes
...No.
For one, you're actually using all-caps for emphasis, instead of simply doing the logical thing and using italics. Another is that you're using italics to indicate thoughts... in a first-person story. What? Just... what? That has no logical or even practical reason for existing. At all. Barely even as an experiment in writing style, and even then it looks unprofessional.
And the personal kicker is that you've... not read the original, from what I'm hearing? Yet you've read the sidefics... and Project Horizons (the pile of crap that it is) at that... and not the original. You've put no effort into reading the actual source material, you're just making a fanfic based on fanfics of a fanfic, instead of cutting out the middle man, doing the sane thing, and reading the original.
Downvote, never faving, would report if it was acceptable to do so (it's not), and personally I think you need to read the original, tear this crap down, and go back to the drawing bored with the sticky 'use the original only' in the biggest bold font you can, unless you're taking minor elements as references. Minor.
You have enough potential as a writer for me to say that if you actually put in quality effort and did your homework properly on FOE then you'd have the ability to do a full story. This is not quality effort. You've read sidefics, ignore Kkat's work, and while I will ignore your tastes as a person and focus on you as an author, the worst part is your formatting, which either is an experiment or in need of a proofreader who needs practice by editing something easy.
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Not agreeing with all of your points, but yes, yes I can. I'm planning it. Since you insta-watched me, just keep watching. And no; read the original. Don't just read sidefics, because not all are following the original and just worldbuilding. Unless you read the actual work, you're essentially saying 'screw you, I do what I want!' like this idiot.
Kkat is why you people write this; give her the goddesses-damned respect she deserves, pleb. If you don't you're just doing what you stated you hated; Fallout with ponies. Only by reading the Word of God (FOE, trope, look it up) can you fully understand what actually matters instead of just writing bullcrap like this author.
And don't knock pure crossover until you hit the goods; my buddies in the Mojave Express make hilarious and awesome stuff doing it. Even I've attempted, crap as it is.
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Glad you loke CC. The reson the protaganist are not fighting run of the mill giant ant and, bloatfly clones is due to the 5 level headstart. levels 1-5 will be covered in later chapters as Ghost recalls those times. As for specials Char has a 9 in charisma since that was what he had pre-ghoulifacation, if you noticed his traits one of them is "ghoul" which would imply a penalty to his charisma score, while CC has a charisma of 1 due to her shyness (you cant be charismatic if you hardly ever talk to anyone), as for the stats, i follow the system from the games more than a pen and paper type system. (yes even generic raiders have Special stats), but ill tone it down in future installments (it wouldnt have been as notable if i added Char to the party next chapter.
Being that i base my story closer to how the games play, is why you see certain elements like raiders and hunting rifles by level 5, . in FO3 you could have a 10mm, hunting rifle, smg and possibly and assault rifle or minigun and a house and be fighting raiders and supermutants if you know where to go. FNOV yo can leave the Doc's house with a 9mm smg and laser pistol if you have good skill set ups so its not uncommon.
but glad you enjoyed it, hope you stick around for more adventures. *brofist*
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While i appreciate your criticisms, but I'll thank you not to insult me and my work on my own page.
This is probably my first major exploration writing anything remotely on this scale i admit it may seem rough and unpolished since im currently working without any editors, proofreaders ect. this is a solo venture for the time being and i'll be the first to admit im no writing major or anything. if you accually read my author note's you would notice i stated as much. all thing considered it could be far worse but instead i tried to make an enjoyable ride for the readers rather than just what i wanted.
you dont really have a right to judge my work based solely on weather i read the original FOE yet or not. as for taking elements of the from the other fics, i hhadnt even done that. im attempting to keep my story as MINE, not anyone else. when i start bring up goldenblood, roy mustang, vikeans and the dead boys you can then you can call me on that shit.
and dont quote tropes at me dude. im a fellow troper. its not like i have a lack of research between what TV tropes has and the FOE wiki.has. and im not disrespecting Kkat and going "fuck that, im just gonna put what i want". i just havent read it yet. theres a distinct difference between the two. at least i didnt make an over cliche'd fic with a "marty stu" MC.
And i dont know about you, but i always imagined mythought were in italis.
-GH0STSHAD0W
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but, id appreciate the help
sorry about the typos, i have to work in the dark most the time to to being nocturnal but having normal roommates
Not bad. Curious as to where it will go. I have two questions that I'm curious on.
First, cycles? I would love to know how ponies use those. Sounds like fun.
Second, how does he know that Diese was once called Diesel Springs if the sign fell apart?
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answer one, its not hard to imagine with speed junkie unicorns and earth ponies, obsessed with speed, after the powered wagon was invented, kept figuring ways to make them smaller faster light, and eventually had the idea, "what if it had a two wheels?" the result was a motorcycle type vehicle suited for ponies. (for how it would look, think of a cross between a Japanese sprint bike [a honda bike on 'roids] and the tron legacy light cycles). the rider straddles it (in a manner how a human would), and the barrel of their chest is above the engine, gem converter (the "gas tank") and fairing while the forehooves are situated in a cup like grip in the handlebar for throttle and steering. it has a talisman enchanted to balance it removing the need for a kick stand. yes i put a lot of thought into it to make a (semi) "realistic" pony ridable motorcycle. i can draw up what it looks like if you want.
as for how we know it's was called "Diesel Springs" once, oral tradition. when the first ponies moved into the settlement, there was a tour guide bot in the museum (now Diese's town hall, located on the east branch of the cross) that told the history of the town, which was popular tourist attraction. the robot though now (50 odd years later) is deactivated and stored (in a broom closet), the current mayor knows the whole story and tells it to visitors to entice them into moving, settling down there(it does have slightly better than average (for the wasteland) living conditions
plus the other half of the sign is still near the bottom of the pole with "Diese" still on it
ill be glad to answer any other questions you have. stay tuned for chapter two
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actually, have a motopony anyways
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enjoy your pony on a motorcycle
made this specifically to answer your comment.
Welcome to the Fallout: Equestria group! It's just a tad late, but whatever. I'll still welcome you anyway!
I read over some of your first chapter here, and I will be honest with you. It's a decent start. Not the worst I've seen, but certainly not the best. One of my biggest issues with this is the grammar; more specifically the capitalization. It's extremely hard to read some sections as the capitalization is simply horrid.
I'm sure that if you got a proofreader though, that the issue could be corrected. Story wise, it's okay. Not the strongest thing I've seen, but trust me some people put absolutely no effort into their work. I can tell at least you sat down and did your best. Which is worth commending on its own in my opinion.
Dialogue seems fine, and everything else seems in order for the most part. (At least from what I could see.)
Overall, not bad. Not bad at all. Could use some fixing up a bit, but it's not bad for a first go. Also, you might want to fix the capitalization in the description. It draws in more readers if the description is neat. (Just so you know.
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But for your effort, and for entertaining me a bit I'll give it a like.
- Noakwolf
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) so im going to fix some of the little mistakes (grammar, typos, ect), im glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the like
thanks, im happy to say, i finally have a proof reader/ editor (
edit: i forgot to mention, im going to red the descrption for it soon since it has more plot (lol) than it used to
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You're welcome. :3
I wonder if Ghost will meet up with someone named Shadow . . .
3957112 anything is possible.
4005117 It's in reference to your name. Ghost and Shadow, GH0STSHAD0W, look at it. See every detail.
4007557 i i know exactly what you were getting at
4103040 Good. But may I ask when you plan to release the next chapter?
4109774 im working on it. life came up and has been keepin me busy a lot lately. glad you like the story so far though
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. Good story by the way. 
Life, that damned life is always getting in the way
4135203 lol know right?
buy
/)*(\ highfive for bein awesome
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'Twas no problem.