Two things: First, "Modern Warfare" is for xbox 360, and Second, how did Mystic's dad afford twenty-( five?) acres plus wildlife if they "aren't wealthy" ?? *lifts left eyebrow* Explain it to me.
also you really need to run this chapter through some kind of spell check; Microsoft Word, for example.
2923452 Mist's father made his son a nickname, since his wife wouldn't allow that name, so he calls him that anyways. Mist's father also was living in that house when he was single, and had a better paying job until he met his wife, and now he has a family to feed, so he doesn't get as much extra cash to splurge with.
On the other hoof, I write the chapters in Microsoft word. So I know some of the words are spelled wrong, for they are either to accomidate an accent of a character, or are sound effects, or my computer is just retarded. I'm glad you're enjoying it too.
One issue, "clip" is mentioned multiple times in this, "magazine" is only mentioned once. A clip helps put the ammunition into the gun, but then is immediately discarded. A magazine is put into the gun itself and houses the unused ammunition during firing. Care to specify which you are referring to?
Wait, I thought he had a sister...
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Did I say he had a sister, because I honestly can't remember if he did.
2922814 Im in the same boat, did he mention it in passing or was that another fic...
Two things:
First, "Modern Warfare" is for xbox 360, and
Second, how did Mystic's dad afford twenty-( five?) acres plus wildlife if they "aren't wealthy" ?? *lifts left eyebrow*
Explain it to me.
also you really need to run this chapter through some kind of spell check; Microsoft Word, for example.
Other than that, great chapter, Bro!
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Mist's father made his son a nickname, since his wife wouldn't allow that name, so he calls him that anyways.
Mist's father also was living in that house when he was single, and had a better paying job until he met his wife, and now he has a family to feed, so he doesn't get as much extra cash to splurge with.
On the other hoof, I write the chapters in Microsoft word. So I know some of the words are spelled wrong, for they are either to accomidate an accent of a character, or are sound effects, or my computer is just retarded.
I'm glad you're enjoying it too.
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That might have been in a different fic. Because this OC is an only child
One issue, "clip" is mentioned multiple times in this, "magazine" is only mentioned once. A clip helps put the ammunition into the gun, but then is immediately discarded. A magazine is put into the gun itself and houses the unused ammunition during firing. Care to specify which you are referring to?