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Luna has had enough of Celestia's games, and has found the perfect means of revenge.  Using a long-forbidden spell, she transforms her sister into little more than a small filly, all so she could pull the greatest prank ever.  Unfortunately, she soon learns that before you fool around with dangerous magic, you really need to read the fine print...

A sequel can be found here.

First Published
22nd Feb 2012
Last Modified
8th Apr 2012

YES! Thank you! I found this once on EqD but could never find it to finish it. From what I recall this was a lovely story. Let's see if I'm right!

Edit: I know doing this a week late is ironic, but who cares. Probably the only time I'll ever be able to do this:

OMC!! My Little freaking Alicorn on Fimfiction!!!!11

yesyesyesyesyesyesyes!!!

thank you thank you thank you!!!

:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

I read this on EQD.  I enjoyed it.

Thank you so much for posting this here, not a big fan of googledocs.

Kickass! Followed this for the longest time on EqD.....then I lost the link. But hey, now I can leave feed back!

Damn you school, I got stories to read! What do you mean saying: learn about this or that author from a hundred years ago? I want to read more than just the first chapter of this!

FINALLY!, NO MORE GOOGLEDOCS TO READ THIS PIECE OF EPIC LITERARY FANART!:yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::trollestia:

:rainbowlaugh: I still love this first chapter :heart:. So much WIN! :twilightsmile:.

>>246281 - I could not have said it better! YaaaaaaaY!!!

Could it be? :pinkiegasp: My favourite Celestia+Luna story finally comes to Fimfiction? :rainbowkiss:

Hellz yeah, I'm tracking the heck outta this baby! :scootangel::yay:

I can only pray that Bluegit's ridiculous "plot" does not come to fruition... :twilightoops:

I'm happy to see another of my favourite stories, has migrated over to Fimfiction :heart::heart::heart:

I hope Pinkie Pie's knowing about the Arcanus e Draconus will simply be "because she's Pinkie Pie."  I'd hate to see her as the reincarnation of Mad Kuchen himself.  :pinkiecrazy:

By the way, I loved how you snuck the section on desserts into Kuchen's work.  I'm fond of a good plum kuchen myself.  :yay:

YESYESYESYESYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYEYSYES:twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::twilightsmile::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay:

Read it on Google Docs. So funny, kept me up for so long one night, thought I might go a bit :pinkiecrazy:

This is quite the story.  I followed the link over from EQD and I'm really impressed with your narrative.

The way you're filling the time with events, instead of just letting the time pass offscreen, tells me that it won't be many more days before Twilight and Pinkie Pie find the cure.  But it won't be by the end of the day, because there's still a little Alicorn that needs to sneak off to a carnival.  :trollestia:

I love how you've fleshed out Luna's character.  Her motivations and reactions, her internal dialogues over children's literature, how she doesn't shirk the PUNY MORTALS routine when it suits her.  I hope things are looking up for her and Celestia too, in the long run.  On the other hoof, I know the troubles with Blueblood are far from over, and now that he has some dirt on the Princesses he may even get some leverage.  

One danger I just thought of, is that Celestia is very vulnerable right now.  She has no magic and is only slightly larger than any other blank-flanked filly.  If Blueblood assumes she's "Princess Sunshine" and has her kidnapped, to be returned only when Ponyville is razed to the ground, things could turn south quickly.

This fic is now Track'd.  I look forward to the next update. :yay:

Yes! I don't have to constantly check googledocs anymore! This is a dream come true!

MOTHERFUCK EVERYTHING YOU PUT THIS HERE YOU PUT THIS HERE I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU PLEASE HAVE MY CHILDREN TAKE ME NOW YOU GLORIOUS, MAGNIFICENT STALLION.

Due the lack of someone whose name references Caps Lock  refuses to say this i will say it:trollestia:

Heh.

I do really like this story.:yay:

oh shit Celestia's gonna be MAD!  :trollestia:  Twilight torch'd her porn collection!

To be honest, when I started to read this story, I didn't know what to expect.

I am truly glad that I did start to read it. Thank you very much for taking the time to write all this.You really are a great writer.

YES! good to see this awesometimes story on here!

I'm glad this is on FiMFiction now. It'll be much easier to track now.:twilightsmile:

Another molestia fic, eh? There's a lot of these, but this one is among the best i've read so far. I am not a big fan of molestia genre, but i enjoyed reading this one a lot.

>>246175 Agreed. GoogleDocs is a pain. In fact, wasn't there some kind of fiasco with a fanfic - might have been this one - when the author forgot to set it so it couldn't be editted? From what I heard it was an absolute disaster.

And to the author:

TRACKED SO HARD.

ALL MY STARS...erm, ALL MY THUMBS...UP!

So... Many... D'aaaw... Attacks...

... (•_•)... Did I read what I thought I just read...

hurray my favorite fic has finally come!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Uh oh.

UH OH.

OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! :pinkiegasp:

We need an adult!

You get Pinkie Pie.

okay...

I think filly celestia is soooooooo cute! Cuter than this :rainbowkiss:

Luna, I am very sorry to say this but I think you just invoked Murphy's Law for tonight.:twilightoops:

I too am glad that this story finally showed up on fimfiction.:pinkiehappy:

Oh wow! I can't wait to see what happens next~! And this was on EqD? Is it finished there?! Does someone have the link to the next chapter there?

Oh and awesome last line for the 12th chapter: I AM THE WORST MOTHER EVER! :heart:

Oh damn, I get the feeling this is going to lead to an explanation as to Pinkie's own special brand of magic. Much love for this story so far, good sir, definitely an enjoyable read. Consider me tracked and watched :pinkiehappy:

This is awesome!

By the way, is it a bad sign that I'd have Pinkie's family killed up to (and inlcuding) third cousins, then have Pinkie herself neutured? Probably.

Oh, and the nobles are massive jerks, though they seem to be learning. And Celestia's finding out unpleasant truths; though she was always one to stick her head in the sand. And who the heck let's your guards undermine your authority like that? And the nobles must be put in their place, I mean really! Celestia needs to read Michavelli's The Prince, if she wants to run her country better.

Oh, and by the by, is it also a bad sign that the first response to Luna's possesion is that I'd kill her? Of course, now that she's been cleansed by the evil forces by The Elements, I'm a bit more trustworthy now.

The Sun Goddess needs to grow a pair.

I remember when I first found this, very good for getting over depressing feeling left from reading the "To Be an Alicorn" follow up to Spark.

oh god blueblood wil see filly celestia.....

can you say blackmail?

Yes, I've followed this all the way through to current chapter on EQD.  Now that it's here, it'll be easier for me to find, track and read.

easy, kuchen is german for cake, i sense a relationship between pinkie and kuchen!

Was there a H.P Lovecraft reference? so awesome :rainbowkiss:

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