Scootaloo is heartbroken when she sees Rainbow Dash hit the ground. She returns, and talks to her idol. But when an unexpected visitor shows up to talk to her, will she remember his advice? And is Rainbow Dash actually still there with her?
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I would love to see a follow up.
From the technical standpoint, insofar as I am qualified to give it, I felt that it was a bit hurried: The horrible revelation of their friend's death was, for each of them, only a few lines.
That note aside,
It was quite touching, and I'd like to see some more, too. It's nice to see somepony who's views on death are not of eternal lonliness. Keep it up!