Of course I can't remember what had happened over the last week, or how I ended up in a Porsche, or why I picked up this girl off the side of the road. Was it pity for her because she couldn't speak? No. Whatever. I need her help to find out what had happened to me, and why my laptop wallpaper bugs me so much.
This is a P.o.E. story between a boy and Octavia. What's there more to say.
This is the last incomplete story I'll ever start, by the way. The Cover image was used without permission. Don't like it? Bite me.
Chapters (3)
This premise sounds eerily familiar.
I'll read it but it certainly is strange how familiar this feels.
Really nice story so far. As you can probably tell from my avatar, I kinda like Octavia.
Very interesting to find this type of story where a pony is in our world as a human, instead of the reverse. First one I've seen side I got here...
A neat premise, and I like that the narrator's amnesia conveniently explains how he's managing to take everything in stride. The only thing I'm wondering is that based on his observations, he doesn't seem to remember anything about his past (he has to look up his own address, he checks his own reflection), yet it's stated that he only can't remember the past week. Kind of a confusing discrepancy.
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Thank you, but I can assure you, I'm not the first.
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That's explained later.
2782131 You made the first I've seen, doesn't that mean something?
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Crap, I messed up there, I meant to say I'm not the only one who's made this type of story. And it does count.
Maybe a little...
Maybe a lot...
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Well shit, let me fix that. Thanks for pointing that out.
Edit: fixed
Nice job hitting the story's plot with a train before immediately loosing trained attack dogs and wild jungle beasts on its mangled corpse and then burning it into unrecognizable ash with a lack of reverence that would make a sixteenth-century Christian preacher scream bloody murder.
In other words, that was perhaps the most immensely unsatisfying ending I've ever read. I sincerely regret that more effort couldn't have been put into developing this story, because up until that last portion you maybe had something good going. :(
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Well... thank you for your opinion?
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You're welcome. Y'know, normally folks pay big bucks for my opinions. Consider yourself lucky to have gotten this one at no charge.
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You should quit while you're ahead. You're starting to get on my nerves
Pretty cool. I really liked it while it lasted, and maybe if you ever decide to write a sequel...
If you don't write a sequel I am tempted to do so.
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Do it. although now I'm thinking about what I could come up with. Still do it.
Edit: no I'm not
also I now have a burning hatred of cop outs.