With my last few breathes on this world, I watch the sun die with me. I've made bad decisions and have wished that things could've gone differently at times, but it's no use remembering those bitter moments. Just, however, for a moment, on those moments of moments, I'm reminded of just what I've done.
(There are parts of this story that are indeed canon with the show, but for the most part, I made it up as I wrote along the pages.
Image by ShinePawPony.)
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I liked it, and I had chills at a few points. On a side note I had an idea for a one shot like this last weekend and I have to say this one is better than where I was going with mine.
"Death is a journey we all must take. Tis but another part of life, the one road ever one will travel."
I'm not quite sure to laugh, or be somewhat disturbed by... Pinkie at the end.
I wrote one that covers some similar themes.... Check it: The Last Parade
Okay.... I REALLLY liked that ending!!! How do I favorite this???
Oh, that was sad at the end...
A really good story.
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Oh, no, please, go ahead and write the one-shot you were planning to do!
Too often I see writers with extreme potential cast away their stories because of finding a story that they find to be 'better' and stop writing the story completely. Please, do go on!
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You should laugh while feeling disturbed by Pinkie! I will admit, that last part wasn't originally going to be in the story, but after reading a bit about Pinkie 'breaking the fourth wall', I just couldn't resist throwing something Pinkie related in!
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Ah, yes, I remember reading this story once. It had some pretty interesting concepts, and it actually did inspire some parts of the story. (Mainly, the end.) I felt as if, however, the story ended on too good an ending...And I very much prefer sad endings, so I went along, thought it out a bit, then made my own version of events involving Celestia and her viewpoint.
That was a good story man
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Naw I'm not going to stop what I was going to write I'm just going to regroup and reload, it was more of scraping half my mental rough draft due to the volume of cliche` present.
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Ah, well, good luck on your story!
Heavy.
But I cracked up at pinkie, lol
Why are some people so good at this?
even in the darkest hour, even at the final moment, no matter what happens, pinky always gets the last laugh