One shot is all it takes...........

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.....to kill a dictator. To stop a war before it starts. For those who are criminal, to assisinate another.

.....and to roaylly screw things up.

This is an alternate chapter to a later one in my story, Five Years Of Ice. If you haven't read that one, then you won't understand it. And for those of you that have, you probably won't either, but it will come with time.

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Lucky424

Lucky424 #1 · Jun 24th, 2013 · · ·

Well, this was received just as well as I thought it would be!

Dragonfox

Dragonfox #2 · Jul 2nd, 2013 · · ·

I wood like you to know that you are a good righter. I just can't give a fums up because of the bad ending to the story. I do hope you do not! con tin you this line of story. I much prefer the direction the first story took. ('');

Lucky424

Lucky424 #3 · Jul 2nd, 2013 · · ·

2810985 That's why I posted it as a separate story. I've read too many where we get halfway through, and then something like this happens, but then they class it as and Alt ending, and carry on. I rather seem them either posted as a separated story, or placed as the last chapter, not in the middle.

And it's my first time writing 'tragedy', so I don't expect it have the same success as my others..

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