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(This was the first story I ever tried writing. Granted, it was difficult to begin with, so I'm starting slow before getting to longer fics like this would've been. I'm sticking to short stories in the meanwhile.)

It's the 24th Annual Future Musician's Camp at the Canterlot School for Gifted Unicorns. Unicorns, Pegasus, and Earth ponies alike are allowed to visit. One pegasus in particular will learn to come out of his shell and realize to not be so afraid. How will he take on this experience without his sister to rely on?

This story will be innocent at most. No clop scenes, though there may be romantic scenes in later chapters. There will be occasional swearing in this fic, but it will be as limited as possible. (Mainly on Deb's side)

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Comments ( 5 )

OC centric fics are very challenging to pull off. I gather that you know this, but could still use reminding. I entered with very low expectations and was pleasantly surprised with the quality of writing. I'll stick with it for a few chapters and see where you go.

VINYL AND OCTAVIA NOT WORKING OUT?!?!?!? Sir I am dissapoint!

2743006 It'll be explained as to why later on, but it's easy for the mind to think why it happened. :raritywink:

Saw your comment, I might as well review this... Very amusing story if you can review my newest one, if you don't mind that is.

I am finding this story very funny and interesting. As a guitar player, the concept of a music camp instantly dragged me in. The character Treble was also very cool in character, his attitude reminds me of a certain other fan character. And I liked how you kept with the personalities of the ponies on the show very thoroughly. Pinkie breaking the fourth wall? Made me laugh into tears!

I realize I'm not the best reviewer ever. (I can barely review a good sandwich to eat) Just know that it's a good story, original, and has an interesting plot to it. Keep doing what you're doing!

Comment posted by M18 Hellcat deleted Jun 30th, 2013
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