Final Chapter, End of Book 1 Chapter 12
I'd been in Equestria for 6 years, I felt pain, love, and many other emotions, but the one that bothered me the most was the loneliness that accompanied all of this. I was the only one of my kind in this world, even if I was surrounded by all of these friends it was just...different, I had no one to love, just these friends for whom I cared for much, I loved them, but not in a way where I could truly express how I loved them. Earth, I could go back there, but I could also lose all of this. I had to speak with Celestia, I needed someone else, another Human in Equestria, otherwise I felt that I would wind up snapping.
I flew to Canterlot quickly the next day, at full tilt, instead of the usual eight hour journey I made it in six, maybe even broke a record. I landed in Canterlot gave those who waved a friendly nod or wave back, I entered the castle quickly and immediately walked up to Celestia, "Hello Collin, I wasn't informed you were coming today." Celestia said as she saw me approach, "We need to talk right now." I explained no further and headed towards the Library. Celestia quickly followed after me, Luna overheard Celestia and followed me in as well.
We all sat inside of the Library, the silence was deafening, Luna was the first to speak, "So why did you come and visit us without informing us before, this is quite a surprise." Luna said, even though it came across a little rude I knew how she meant it, "Well." I cleared my throat, "I want to ask both of you a question..." Luna and Celestia exchanged a glance, "Speak your mind Collin, Luna and I will answer to the best of our abilities." Celestia said, I looked up at the two, "I want to bring another Human to Equestria." Celestia and Luna managed to hold a decent poker face, but you could still tell they were taken a little off guard by this. "Why?" Luna asked continuing on. This was hard, it was unfair to them, but I had to say something. "I know I have all of you as my friends, and your all incredible, but I need something more than a friend, I've been alone for 6 years now, and I need someone to be with me." I explained as best I could while trying to be subtle, Celestia and Luna seemed to be deep in thought, they did not speak before they both looked up and said, "Fine, but the person you choose must be whole and true, they must be like you." I nodded, I tried to maintain a professional like appearance, but I couldn't hold myself to it, I pulled them both into a hug, "Thank you." The three of us hugged for a moment more and then we departed, I had to be off soon. I flew back to Ponyville at full tilt again.
After another 6 hour flight I'd been up about fifteen hours, which meant I would need rest if I was going back to earth.
I explained to Twilight, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, and Rarity that I would be gone for a while. I knew there was a time difference between Earth and Equestria, There had to be, otherwise I'd look a lot different at this point.
I flew to the original spot where'd I'd originally entered Equestria, I could see through the tree's the old Canadian maple tree's that'd I'd lived with for most of my life. "I guess this is it." I thought to myself. I took a deep breath this was the first time I'd ever step back into earth.
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Loved this story it was nice and simple with a nice friendly mood in it
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Well the Reason she thought of the Everfree is because as you cna tell the character is different than most. He has a sense of how to handle situations, especialy dangerous ones, but mainly being as there's quite a bit of logic to it, If you we're to ahve him in the Everfree he'd be a look out of sorts, see dangers coming long before they arrived to Ponyville, Canterlot etc... Basically if he did choose to go to the Everfree it'd be for the greater good.
479992for the greater good hotfuzz
481014 Heh, Well I hope you're enjoyin g the Fic, I'm working on the Sequel as well
This is a great fic. However I do have some ways you can improve.
1. There is a lot of repetition in there. After about three times, we all know it's Equestrian time.
2. There is some redundancy. Some things a given.
3. Y U NO INCLUDE SPIKE!?
4. Well... That's all I could notice.
INSTANT FAV!!!
486458 I'll be sure to include Spike some more in the Sequel now, and yea I know this Fic isn't the greatest, but I felt really good about writing this, i mean 64 pages? It's bigger than any report I've ever written. Anyways, Glad for the input and happy that you enjoyed it.
500493 Eeyup. I really liked it. Is the sequel out yet?
I see what you were talking about
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I agree, this was my first ever fic/Book/writing anything.
I feel that overtime I've become a generally better writer, this isn't a great fic, and I don't feel that The sequel is much better, but I feel that my latest fic is going to be the best yet.
Good