A mute human falls into Equestria. will he find friendship, will he find love, what will happen when he meets the main 6.
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Loved it
I was really interested but then you did the whole turn him into a pony thing. I will read more chapters however.
Hey where's that one guy that comments on these chapters? Good story btw
Oh, there he is!
i truly enjoyed this little epic.
however I feel compelled to give you a bit of advice...
flush out your world a little bit more, as much as I loved your piece, I never felt like I was actually THERE.
I suggest you try reading some of the higher ranked fics for refrance
however I do not know your personal situation or time constraints.
I give you this advice with the hope your next fan fiction is even better.
I keep seeing this common problem in many brony fanfics. Little to no character development. You rushed to much. Twilight wouldn't simply fall i love with some random alien-pony from another dimension after knowing him for only 2-3 days. It's simply unrealistic and strays too far from the personality we see on the show. But other than that DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
92581 read the story more closely. It says about A month or so later
this is anepic story but as fragged42 said you should read some high ranking fics
why... WHY DO I LIKE THIS SO MUCH?!?!?!?!?!
34337 if you do i'll tell you how ALL my OC's got theirs (minus the 3 that do not have cutie marks)
Greatness ensues. Would've been SUPER interesting if he was a mute the whole story. Woulda been hard, but pretty awesome
One does not simply leap into equestria
SWAG nuff said
this was a good read
P.S. how do in isert pics into the comments
Why did they automatically assume that he would 1 have a name and 2 would be able to understand their language? Also, I can't many stories (1) that don't just ignore or quickly do away with the language barrier, it seems like it could be a very interesting plot device, especially if they believe that the human is just another, or a mentally challenged pony.
a good start a good start I hope the chapters are a bit longer then the prologue but if its not I'll still give it a read. just for future reference though if the chapters aren't longer at least give it a try.
woah didn't see that coming
hmm interesting and ugh I feel bad for that guy I cant even think how bad chalk tastes ulk
aww thats cute falling asleep as the party came to a close
love cures mute
cool
well......that was quite unexpected
victory ha ha twilight is happily married to solarin