When a colt attempts to assassinate Celestia things go incredibly wrong and now he has to bring honor to his name by finishing what he started. But what happens when a certain purple unicorn starts to worry for his sake?
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I am uploading chapters in bulk.
That is alot of chapters...
2727513
It's because I've been writing for like 30 hours
AAAAAAAAAnd because I already had half of the chapters done
LOL TARDIS
Well that's some bullshit confession right there
Nice story! I wub it :D
The feels there too much feels over load aggghhhhhh
He carries weakness queen?
You carry arrogance and stupidity
And death shall judge your soul guilty or innocent
And your soul is most certainly judged guilty!
You have a good idea and premise for the story, but your writing could use some serious work. Show don't tell. I will niether upvote nor downvote. You have the creativity to be a very good writer, all you need to work on is how you write.
~Phantomwriter
... Imma read all this
One of the bests fanfics i every read. Good Job my friend! A masterpiece for sure!
From your friend of Brazil
Allec Fox
... She just lets him go? After slaughtering one of her guards? In her own castle? A guard with hopes, dreams, friends, parents. Who will now recieve a very sombre letter from his captain that their 'boy will not be coming home'. That is cold, Celestia...