Now that Twilight Sparkle is a new alicorn princess, she has a lot of new responsibility. However, looking to the future doesn't mean forgetting the past. A strange family of Zebras come to Canterlot to meet her and she and her friends soon grow to learn about their culture and the ancient history of Equestria, the world before Equestria, and the alicorns.
When a mysterious zebra alicorn named Voodoo arrived to meet her, Twilight Sparkle and her friends get a look at the origins of ponydom
Chapters (5)
Nice work! I am loving it
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Thnx. This is my first MLP fic. I've not written fanfiction in years in general, so starting up with a new series entirely is a little nerve-racking. I hope to get the next chapter up soon. I got a lot of history to cover..if I can get to that part lol
I like the premise alot, will absolutely give a fav and like.
It might need some clearing up on grammar, nitpicking really but it never hurts to have a proofreader!
Otherwise keep em comin'
You need to change all the <i></i> to [ ] in your story.
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Yeah, I started fixing it but when I read through it I saw I missed a few. I got a bit of fixing to do. I had hoped to have it done and be partway through chapter 3, but got so busy with work stuff. SOON! Muahahaha!
For the footnote numbers, you might want to put a space between it and the word, and maybe in brackets or parenthesis (1).
At first, I thought the world of the Quagga was named QuaggaL ...
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Whoops I didn't even CHECK it after I loaded it. I just uploaded it and went to bed. Okay. Nooooo problem. I'll go back and fix that today. In the original page, it was supposed to be smaller and elevated. Apparently it just didn't translate over. Thnx for letting me know. I don't want to confuse people.
Very nice fic, loved the bit where Pinkie Pie thought all that time had passec with the statue, and the game with Blueblood. I also find it interesting how you introduced zebra pegasus and unicorns, and the little bits and piceces we get of thier culture from your zebra OC's I like how Luna's questioning Twilight's worthiness of being a princess, though I'm not sure how a I feel about there being another 'entity' that approves alicorns- and I do wonder what he 'did' to Starswirl. Anyway, awsome chapter overall, can't wait to read the next one!
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Hopefully those questions will be answered as the chapters and future stories come. I probably will have a fic where Starswirl is explained. Voodoo is definitely a bit outside the norm for Zebras and for Alicorns alike.
I'm glad you like it ^-^ I'm already trying to plan out the next chapter.
Voodoo is awesome, and Mardi Gras is funny. I like the idea of a zebra alicorn. Keep it up!
Nice backstory for Voodoo. I find it ironic the Zebras don't believe in pastel colored equines, or flying ponies. Nice working of human culture and beliefs into your stories.
Okay, I take it alicorns are supposed to be 'ancient astronauts'?
Nice. I wonder if they have a coonection to MLP tales's anilen ponies- the glow n' shows.
I really love the zebra worldbuilding you've done here. If you're still alive, it'd be great to get another chapter some time.
This is so cool. It's not often I find a good fanfic like this let alone one about the zebras. There are more hybrid pony fics than there are zebra fics which is a shame but it makes it easier finding gems like this. :)