The world of unstable magic and splitting factions is Pre-Element Equestria, and for Preston, Damien and Matt this world is now theirs...
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in short: felt pushed, the Chapter and its Content happened to fast.
Luna's Reaction was believable but the speed with which it happened was not. two or three times as much in-world development time would be already considered an quick escalation.
But what happened here was more like : "A Dreamer(the proverbial Creator of all things in Existence) wanted thees events to happen as fast as possible, regardless of the former planned compositional consistence of the history of this world."
Or in short "there are something around six or seven chapters of contend cutted together into one Chapter"
Or in Super short: "Escalates FAR to fast."
^^"
Anyhoofs, screams "Sequel" ^^