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AxleandWheel


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10 years ago, a disaster struck. The princesses disappeared without a trace. Without their influence over the skies, the weather grew out of control. I don't know where my friends are. I don't know who my friends are. All I have is my fireplace and Spike.

My name is Twilight Sparkle. And it has been snowing for 10 years

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Reminds me of a steam game I sometimes play.

I must say, good read.

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Is it Little Inferno?

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Eyup. Because chucking stuff into fire in real life is too time consuming. Awesome game and awesome story.

I've only ever seen one or two videos about Little Inferno, but that was more than enough to see the relation.

I really liked this story. The winter apocalypse scenario just works really well here. Also, I don't have any of my usual gripes about grammar or spelling. Your syntax is immaculate. Immediate like and favorite for me.

Crossover tag is where?

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Thank you very much. I wanted this story to at least look good, so I had my star prereader go over it with a fine toothed comb

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I didn't put a crossover tag because while the story was influenced by Little Inferno, it isn't a direct relation.

A unique story and a good read. Well done!

A few thoughts:
- That is one well-written piece of work right there with no obvious spelling or grammar mistakes - kudos to your prereader.
- Did you really have to kill off Pinkie Pie :pinkiesad2:?
- I wonder what happened to the princesses. Maybe I missed a clue or something.
- In addition, you really got me with that Dinky Hooves twist.
- By the way, that was one eccentric gate operator. :rainbowlaugh:

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If it makes you feel better, we can say pinkie faked her death and is now in Equestria's version of Hawaii. Also, you didn't miss anything, the princess' disappearances aren't explained.

2676103 Knowing her, that is probably the truth.

This... this is truly beautiful.

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