• Published 30th May 2013
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Warped Dreams - nathanmcb



Humans have been transported to Equestria, looking for help and a way back to their world. They do something wrong. Horribly wrong.

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Pony Prologue

In a galaxy far far away, there is a beautiful, lush world that has avoided the technological age and still complies with the rules of magic. Within the atmosphere, the air is fresh and the sky is still beaming with a bright blue, like what Earth once was.

The residents of this world do not fight unless they found there was no other way out. In the center of this beautiful, lush world is a city, named Canterlot. Inside that city are many stores and houses, all bursting with activity. Residents would buy and sell goods, go home, wake up, and repeat. This was the average day for the residents of this world.

Though the world is very similar to the human world, there is one major difference; This world is run by ponies. The race in charge of this world are alicorns and in the center of the city ,which is in the center of the world, is a castle which from a glorious shining white emanates from the Sun when the beams hits The Castle, however at night it still looks magnificent as instead of a glorious white, it is a midnight blue color to match the Moon. Within the walls of the castle were two alicorns, which are the rulers of the Sun and Moon.

“Luna, are you ready for the Summer Sun Celebration?” shouted a majestic voice, connected to the pony that went by the name of Celestia, she had a white coat with a flowing rainbow mane. She had a sun tattooed on her flank.

A purple alicorn with a dark blue, flowing mane ran down a long flight of stairs. She arrived in front of the white alicorn, panting.

“I am sorry sister, I am a little late.” said the purple Alicorn, worried of her punishment. The white Alicorn just laughed and nuzzled her sister.

“It is alright, you don’t have to be so worried!” Celestia said with a warming smile. The purple alicorn frowned and looked down to the ground while shuffling her hooves a little.

“Luna, are you alright?” Celestia questioned, with a worried tone in a her voice.

Luna looked up to her sister and Celestia could see the pain in Luna’s eyes.

“I am just... why is there a Summer Sun Celebration and not a... Winter Moon Celebration?” Luna exclaimed. Celestia laughed.

“Luna, there is.” Celestia replied in a calm voice. Luna looked confused.

Celestia lift a hoof over Luna’s shoulder, pulling her into a gentle hug.

“It is called Hearth’s Warming Eve.” Celestia said with a smile on her face.

Celestia began to walk out of the big gate to the castle when Luna tried to stop her.

“Wait... Isn’t that celebrating the past? Tia... Celestia don’t lie to me!”


Directly South of the city was a small village known as Ponyville. Despite its small size, it had quite a few residents living there. Life in the village was completely different to life in the city and if any normal pony was going to move from the city to Ponyville, it would take them a few days to adjust to the change in pace

The sun was beaming bright this morning. Finally, all the hard work of everypony in the village had finally paid off.

Twilight ran around to everypony, making sure that they all had everything in order. The princesses only came out every now and then and Twilight didn’t want anything to go wrong. She went to the library for final preparations. The library was inside a giant hollowed-out tree and if you had never seen the design before, you would think it was just a normal tree.

“Drapes... check, lights... check, rugs... check, list... check, list of lists... check. Alright, everything seems to be in order!” Shortly after checking over the list again and again, an orange pony named Applejack walked into the library.

“Howdy Twi! Is everything ready for the Summer Sun Celebration?” Applejack asked her friend.

“Yes it is!” Twilight said delightedly. Applejack smiled.

“That’s good t’ hear. Well c’mon, we need ta’ get to the Town Hall,” Applejack said. After hearing this, Twilight got up and began running to the Town Hall, as she did not want to be late.

“Wait up Twi!” shouted Applejack, before following her friend out of the door.


The day was coming to a close, and as time progressed forward the beautiful, bright sun crept away, giving life to the glorious blanket of the night. Everypony snuggled up with one another, they all closed their eyes and were excitedly anticipating the next day, as it was the Summer Sun Celebration, a time where everypony joins together and celebrates the rising of the sun after the defeat of Nightmare Moon. Once again, it is being held within Ponyville. Celestia and Luna took the liberty of going to Ponyville beforehand to make sure the Elements of Harmony were alright with leading the preparations.

The Elements of Harmony are six very special ponies which all have a very special talents unlike no other. There is Twilight Sparkle, Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie.

There is a knock at the hollowed-out tree. Twilight Sparkle opened the door and before she could utter a word, she saw two majestic ponies standing upright, looking down at her.

“Princess Celestia... Princess Luna!” Twilight blurted out, shocked that the two rulers were at her doorway. Though they have been quite a few times, it was always shocking for Twilight to see them.

“Hello my little Pony!” Celestia says, in her confident voice, outspoken by all... Including Morgan Freeman. Luna let out a simple smile, she is always nervous in Ponyville, even more so because this celebration celebrates the defeat of her former self.

Twilight Sparkle stepped aside, giving the two Alicorns enough room to enter. In sync, they both walked in, taking light steps to not soil their reputations as princesses. Twilight, looking curious as to the reason for their early visit decides to ask.

“Princess, the Summer Sun Celebration is not for another three hours, why are you here so early?” Twilight says, while closing the door behind the two princesses. Luna looks around the library suspiciously. Celestia tilted her head while looking at Luna, she then puts her hoof onto Luna’s back, making her jump.

“Luna, are you alright? You have been acting nervous since we got here.” Celestia says, looking at her sister with a worried expression on her face. Luna exhales.

“Sorry sister, I am just a little insecure... I haven’t had the best of times in Ponyville...” Luna says while shuffling her hooves around slightly on the cold, mahogany flooring. Twilight walks up to Luna and hugs her tightly.

“Don’t worry Luna, everypony here has forgiven you and they don’t dislike you anymore! You shouldn’t have to feel insecure while you’re in Ponyville.” Luna forces out a smile, trying to act civilized.

“Thank you Twilight Sparkle, I... will remember that.” Luna said.


All the ponies were herding to Ponyville. The Cloak of Night had progressed without a worry in the world. Everything was going smoothly and the sun was about to rise and give way to the brilliant blaze of the magnificent sun. The two alicorns were in position in the town hall. Every pony from far and wide, stallions and mares of all ages had come and are settling into the grand hall, all of them being very eager to see the princesses. The Elements of Harmony sat in the crowd also, waiting to see their rulers once again.

Velvet drapes began to open slowly, everypony stopped their conversations and began to listen in. The two princesses were revealed under the velvet curtain. Celestia began to speak in her majestic voice.

“Welcome everyp...”

Celestia gasped and she is interrupted by a strange sound which nopony had ever heard, followed by a strange raspy voice repeating “Warning” loudly over and over. Harsh shaking began followed by three loud crashes that were heard within the walls of the hall, one after the other.

Everypony is deathly silent within the building. Luna couldn’t take it anymore and began to sprint through the major crowd of people to the outside. Luna saw three giant, metallic, objects hammered into the ground. Each worsening the shaking and landing at opposite parts of Equestria.Luna’s pupils dilate and she began to shake. Celestia appeared behind Luna.

“It looks like one is in Filly Delphia, one in the Hayseed Swamp and one is in San Palomino Desert.”

Luna quickly turns her head to Celestia.

“Sister... what is happening?”

Celestia closed her eyes. Anypony within a million miles could see she was clueless.

“I don’t know...”

End Pony Prologue


Comments ( 11 )

Is this what people like you think the Army does when they don't get what they want?:facehoof:

2650720

No, It is meant as a joke. The prologue for the humans was meant to be stupid. I understand that people are going to dislike it, but if they dislike it for a mere thing as having a joke with the creativity given in writing then I will allow them to dislike :twilightsmile:

and the ponie lost the end

2651651

Haha at least mine and my friends efforts aren't so much wasted thanks to you! :twilightsmile:
I never actually thought about it like that, you're right it is like hatilia.
I will do more if I get more likes because so far the outcome of the fic has not been too good... I blame the first chapter in the its references and stereotypical glory.:pinkiehappy:

2651965 I gave you a like, now write more of this glorious story... I SAID MOAR! :flutterrage: I am litrally throwing 20$ bills at my monitor!

2652203

haha thank you. :twilightblush:
The next part should be up Saturday to Wednesday.
I know there is a quite long difference but I have my English exam on Tuesday and need to revise techniques and persuasions and everything.

A war between humans and ponies? How laughably one-sided. Guns and missiles vs. swords.

2653570
Guns vs magic and flight. It is the ponies homeland and they have the rulers of the sun and moon their too. not really one sided

2653672

COMPLETELY one-sided.

Pony haters want ponies to die by the military, Superman, Sinestro, every OP DC and Marvel villain, ETC.

So, Humans win

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