A few days after Apple Bloom's encounter deep in the Everfree Forest, she had consistent nightmares about what she had seen in Sunny Town. Especially about the two particular Earth Pony who seemingly aided Apple Bloom in her escape.
Apple Bloom managed to lie her way out about what she had painfully gone through to her friends and family. However, on the third night day after the incident, things started to go spiralling down... And it will not stop haunting her until she face the cold hard truth...
This is a story about Apple Bloom after she escaped from Sunny Town, Story of the Blanks.
(I'm having difficulties trying to find the perfect words for my all my chapters, I'm sorry if I made the characters sound dumb. I'm learning though, I need at least some constructive critics so I know what areas I can improve on. This is my first fan fiction and I didn't really plan things through but I have a thoughtful imagination.)
Ok I have something's to tell you...
1) nice story, alot of potential
2) I've read the description... Wtf you don't need criticism this shit is the golden egg, I love it.
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Thanks for the words of inspiration! I'll try to get other chapters up as soon as I can, probably more thought of then the first chapter.
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Well sir ill be here reading it... Is this your first story?
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I guess so... Yeah, this is my first.
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Ha what the fuck, you have some talent ill be whatchin you in the future.
This is good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Have you thought of posting this to the "Many Stories of the Blanks" group?
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I'll keep that in mind. I'll try and force myself not to procrastinate, I'm sorry for any inconvenience for anyone who are waiting for the next chapter.
I have added this to my read later box. I love story of the blanks! Since my first Fic is about one this will definitely catch my interest. I will post a review later when I have read it. In the mean time, keep it up! I love Ruby! I hope see some references to her.
you can use both just so long as they know who/what it is.
Looking good so far, cant wait to see more!
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Thanks for the comment, I'll try to actually plot out the story now. I'm hoping to wrap this up soon.
This is good. To bad it was canceled
CANCELLED??!! Author... get on your keyboard, type and don't stop tiLL THIS STORY IS F-I-N-I-S-H-E-D!!! (Thunder & Lightning)
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I might one day. Not planning to do that any time soon