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Yes the almighty power of sex to change ones mind, or blow it in Trixiess case.
*nosebleed* very well written, and really, really hot.
twilicornXtrixie love it
intrested
oh shit
eat hot pockets and read clop
goes great
not a toy to grab and play with? we will see about that
trixie
this is last comment
bitch you just slam the door at m...
by the way i am going to sex you up
bitch you just slam the door at me
I agree with what you said in the description. Haven't seen much to any Twilicorn x Best pony...I mean Trixie shipping as of yet. Good job. Love the ending.
Lots of shifting between past tense and present tense in the narration. It's very disorienting.
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Sorry, it's a fault with me. I actually rarely notice it even re-reading. To me either tense sounds natural so I've always had issues with it going back and forth. If I ever upload anything else I will attempt to make it more proper.
Please upload a new story, preferably a sequel.
I will now be stalk- er, I mean wat- er, fol- er, WHY IS IT SO HARD TO FIND A WORD THAT DOESN'T MAKE ME SEEM LIKE A STALKER! I will now be...keeping an eye on you...meh, good enough.