The day the Princesses vanished was the last day of peace. Nopony was the same when the sun and the moon continued their way across the sky without the Princesses' magic. With that apparent lie exposed, Equestria was in shambles for weeks, months even.
Everything slowly took a turn for the worse, starting with the betrayal of the Element of Honesty. Nopony really knows what happened that day, except for the other Elements of Harmony. Equestria is shattered.
Five uneven pieces.
Equestria is divided. And it has been so for fifteen years.
We're just the many insignificant ones. This is our lives, stuck in Tartarus.
(The setting belongs to PoorYorickDA, who created this awesome thing that is Equestria Divided)
(This is a one-shot so far, done purely to promote what I believe is a well thought-out grimdark Equestria, but it might evolve into a bigger story someday)
Not bad, not bad! I really wanted to see Mistress Rarity and Commander Applejack have a discussion, and this went perfectly. I think Rarity mockingly using the Pinkie Swear was what really made this intriguing. ;)
Wow. That was brilliant, simply brilliant.
Easily the best Equestria Divided fanfic yet.
Bout time a Equestria Diviided story popped up.
Well done. though I believe I read somewhere rarity is immune to the true sight or something.
Also I think she looks better with the disease.
Really good story, with well written characters. I look forward for the next .
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I would put this with "The Pink Samurai" regarding the quality.
2622522 Well The Pink Samurai had several errors in the english that really bugged me and is also incomplete while this one works as a one shot or a prologue to something more but whatever it's all good.
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For fanfiction, Only several Grammatical Errors is considered amazing