When a spell goes wrong for Twilight, she accendently unlesshes Discord and he causes mayhem in all of Equestria by tanting the apples. Will Everypony be able to survive the misfortunes that Discord and infected ponies bring? With princess Luna as their guide to survive, everypony must work together to stop evil Discord. But without the Elements Of Harmony, will they succeed?
Hey this is my very first FIM fiction so it's not gonna be perfect!! This story will have multiple chapters. And don't ask me why Invader Zim is in the cover photo I can't get him out of there so yeah. Hope you like the story and I f you think I should change anything just let me know!
Chapters (7)
Ummm...
Just face hoof.
Just. Face hoof.
The coverart=awesome.
story=...what?
I'm sorry, but no...
holy crap what's up with the spacing in this story?
Story itself is less than sub-par. Need's some work.
I hate spacing errors. With a passion.
It's one of the only grammar things that can really set me off.
This story makes me feel unclean just by reading it.
is that invader fucking zim int the cover art
"To the panic room!"
"We don't have a panic room!"
"To the the panic room store!"
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We need to find you things to do kev, you have too much free time
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Make a East and West Dakota.
211681 thanks i'm going to use this if you dont mind
211681 I know i didnt want it there but i dont know how to get rid of him
211681 im sorry i dont know what went wrong
211681 the story will make more sense once i get more chapters with the conept in it
211890 well then could you be my prereader and editor since you did such a good job on my chapter 1?
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Here ya go: http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=27
Fimfiction group dedicated to pre-reading. Check it out, and get in contact with someone.
211692
Oh, I read it, but just the grammar and the spacing, it makes me feel like he wasn't even trying.
211692
Are you talking to me? Because if so, be more specific please. I can spot a few... but I'm not sure if that's all of them.
Good job!
Derpy, the mechanical genius!
211421 Leave her alone the story is fine , And this is her first fimfiction story , Im sorry but YES you jerk!211447 You feel unclean from reading a story , YOU are so immature , You must of liked the story if you kept reading it!
Derpy is the new engineer
Good fic so far!
I've noticed the story is ALMOST ALL talking! .....................................
264741 they are saying the spacing of how it used to be it used to be all messed up when I first wrote it. and your supposed to space it out.
Yeah I like putting dialoge. It makes it a little better to.
Thanks~! I work reallly hard on this so I really appreciate that you like it~!
275739 Your not supposed to put spacing , All it does is make your story look longer .. Just saying .. Look at my sotry they are regular paragraphs
277775 you can choose to put spacing in or not but it's better to put it in.
Hey , Good job you finshed another Chapter. I kinda want to wait till the sotry is completed before I read it. Keep up the good work! Doesn't seem like it took you very long to write this one! Yay!
321770 Thanks~! It actually took me a while to write this chapter because I got writers block for a while
but I don't have it anymore! (at least I don't think I do) 
326937 Ahaha , yeah I had wirters block for about 2 weeks.. Then I checked out my story and i'm full of ideas again :) Woot woot
326942 I'm full of ideas to now
Remember , At the start of your paragraph you NEED to indent
^^^^^^ Like that
Whooops. As if we needed another reminder that this guy is a cut-rate Q....his great idea backfired on him big time.
You deserve a moustache
I was wondering if anypony had made a FF from that CoverArt... Truthfully I saw the artwork before and nearly barfed up rainbows when I saw it. It was the most beautiful form of chaos that I have ever set my eyes one!!!!
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In fact I was searching EVERYWHERE to as where, who, and if there was a FF made to order. And I am not disappointing... Well except for why Twilight decided that using an unstable, unpredictable, and totally unused spell would be perfect to test out.... Right in front of Discord.
Twilight you are not making this easy. I like you if only because both of us are huge bookworms, well-read, and number one in our class.... So it hurts me to say this: From one book-nerd to a fellow nerd... But.... DOUBLE TAP!!!! AIM FOR THE HEEEEEE-AD!!!!!
Oh for craps sake... DOUBLE-TAP!! DOUBLE-TAP!!!!!
You always do a double-tap head shot when dealing with zombies!! Kill the brain and you kill the ghoul.
Derpy=Zombie Survivalist Genius.
I don't know... Discord's motivation for causing zombies seems kinda double edged when you think about it.
Never screw around with zombies dude. It never, ever, ever, ever, ever works out for the best.
Please fix the spelling and grammar issues...
This fic has a good plot, it's just not told out that good...
Aww, this is great so far! Keep it up!
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:) exactly!
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No offense meant, but this is her first story. It's a lot better than what most people could come up with. She's a person and she has feelings. At least TRY to point out what you think is wrong with the story so she knows what she should fix.