YEAH! i look forward top reading the next chapter

Awesome, a much desired update. Can't wait to read this later.

I think your writing has improved.

The progression works and fits together logically. Well, as logical as it can be when driven by Pinkie Pie and her invisible giant pockets. (Another idea would be Pinkie having an emergency secret stash of desserts hidden somewhere in Twilight's house, or maybe some kind of cake cannon.) That said, my only concern is that I find it hard to believe Rainbow and Spike would be as surprised at Pinkie's antics as you portrayed them to be, but that's just me being a nit picker.

You've set the scene for a very promising fourth chapter. I await eagerly for it, but please, take your time, a long wait for good writing is preferable to a short wait for rushed writing.

2980106 Thanks for your two bits

I was actually worried that I had jumped the gun one too many times with this chapter, but I have yet to see a fire so I guess everything's fine

And yeah, I'll make sure to take my time with this next part. Thanks again, DirtyApe

2979043 Cool beans

In this paragraph,

Her stomach couldn't stand the wait anymore, a low rumble escaping Twilight. Just the smell of the cupcake she held alone was enough to assuage the rest of her non-food-related cognitions. Pushing the mystery of Spike's current whereabouts to the back of her mind, she lividly swallowed the rest of the cupcake, enjoying the small bulk all the way down.

I don't think "lividly" was the right word. It means extremely angry.

Perhaps blissfully, gleefully, or maybe even titillatingly would work better.

Also, I think that first sentence should be reworded. Like: Emitting a low rumble, Twilight's stomach made it known that it couldn't stand the wait any longer.

There's more sentences that I think should be reworded. I'd be willing to point them out in a long comment if you wanted me to.

2984392 Hey, knock yourself out

Don't...don't really knock yourself out, though

Also, its out of bad habit that I keep misusing livid as another term for lively; it's one of THOSE words for me.

No rush or anything but is there an ETA on the next chapter? Waiting drives me crazy!

3069301 Hehe, yeah, sorry about that. I would like to say that it is almost finished, but I keep finding myself revising and editing what I've written so far. That, and I'm starting up on a bunch of stuff IRL, and some days T.E.P. (Twilight...you know) even slips my mind.

I'm positive, however, that I'll have it posted some time during the weekend, once I'm finished with everything else on my agenda; I will not allow this story to die just yet.

Thanks for reading!

A lot of focus on the bathroom, but you did keep your promise I guess.

Excited about the coming update!

What? Pinkie and Rainbow Dash feel bad about Twilight missing out on a cool party but don't think for a moment that Spike might want to go?

3124329 treating spike like dirt isn't anything new :P