nice chapter but for one thing that pisses me every time i see it
though he still loved her as if she were his mother
Spike himself has said that Twilight is not the mommy, plus according to word of god (Faust) Spike was raised by Celestia not Twilight, why people insist on Spike viewing Twilight as his mother is beyond me! and yes my jimmies are rustled *ahem!* other than that, this was a good chapter (if strange), and i look forward to reading more
2799475 ...I'll be honest, I didn't know about that.
I kept assuming that, since Spike saw Twilight first, he immediately formed a connection of sorts. I guess I'll go back and fix it, derp. (scrubsisepic)
Regardless, I'm so glad you liked this chapter (and that you're still following!), and I'll have more stuff soon.
Also, weight gain? Like putting emphasis on the weight itself? I'll have to study your fics for this
Not so much the weight itself, but the curves and softness created by weight gain. Unless Twilight has a really fast metabolism, all the calories in those pancakes have to go somewhere.
nice chapter but for one thing that pisses me every time i see it
Spike himself has said that Twilight is not the mommy, plus according to word of god (Faust) Spike was raised by Celestia not Twilight, why people insist on Spike viewing Twilight as his mother is beyond me! and yes my jimmies are rustled
*ahem!*
other than that, this was a good chapter (if strange), and i look forward to reading more
2799475 ...I'll be honest, I didn't know about that.
I kept assuming that, since Spike saw Twilight first, he immediately formed a connection of sorts. I guess I'll go back and fix it, derp. (scrubsisepic)
Regardless, I'm so glad you liked this chapter (and that you're still following!), and I'll have more stuff soon.
You should probably include something in the description about a very gassy Twilight, particularly about her rear expulsions.
Anyways, I liked this chapter. Will there be any weight gain in future chapters?
Also, happy birthday. My birthday is in three days.
2799774 Sure, I could add another note in the description.
Also, weight gain? Like putting emphasis on the weight itself? I'll have to study your fics for this
And thanks, its great being *GOVERNMENT RETRACTION* years old. Happy Pre-Birthday, I guess??
Thanks for following!
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Not so much the weight itself, but the curves and softness created by weight gain. Unless Twilight has a really fast metabolism, all the calories in those pancakes have to go somewhere.
My latest story has weight gain - http://www.fimfiction.net/story/112536/mega-munchies
Loved it.
The thing about Spike and Twilight is that you never really know what's going on between them.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Happy birthday btw!
Happy belated birthday
this chapter was very cool. I like that Spike goes submissively to his knees before Twilight instead of waiting on his feet.
2805497>>2802087 Thanks, guys! :D
Yeeeeaaaah.
2815926 Yeah, I keed, I keed.
Update?
When's this going to update? I await eagerly.
2952008 2933771 It's a-comin', guys, just keep holding me to it. :3