interesting.

but if i may ask, who's the romance between?

but if you don't want to spoil it u don't have to tell,

>>208789208789

Calling it now, Granny Smith and Rarity.

>>208789208789

The whole romance of the story will play an integral part in the entire history of the house and the story of it.

But that's all I'm revealing

>>209088209088

>>209088209088

That would be, like, totally, epic. In a pie-spitting way

>>209146209146

Okie dokie then

Sorry for the wait but here's the new chapter

Found this in The Writer's Group and decided to give it a try.

I'm glad I did that too. I'm sensing a lot of suspense coming from this story... It will certainly evolve into something nice.

Your writing is simply wonderful (better than my own) and you clearly know how to grasp your reader's attention and how/where to lead the story.

(Now I wonder why stories like yours aren't recognized, while shitty cupcakes spin-offs or HiEtP Mary Sue, self-inserts make fame)

Tracked and [heavily] recommended.

>>255078255078

Wow. That is the best comment I have EVER gotten

You've just given me a HUGE boost of willingness to work on the second chapter and all subsequent chapters. I cannot thank you enough for that

(And on a side note: Yeah. Sometimes I also wonder why. Every reason I think of just seems to slip away before I can grasp it. It is a bit disheartening )

CONGRATULATIONS ON GETTING FEATURED IN EQD

Chapter 5 is supposed to be called a "Description," right? I'll give this a look later. Congratulations on making it onto EQD.

congrats on getting onto EqD

Thanks everyone

>>353214353214

It sure is. Thanks for pointing out my obvious typo. I'll go change it.

I'm enjoying it so far. Caught a couple of errors though:

- "Mayor! That's ridiculoud!" Terra cried, sitting back down in her seat.

- "If anypony has anything else to add, then say it now, if not, then i announce this meeting as fini . . . "

Close together, about halfway down.

>>377838377838

Thanks. I'll go get those fixed. I'm glad you enjoy it

Oh no. No no no no no.

This has to be some wretched dream, surely! To lose the chance at truest love, mere for the seeming "I need a bad boy" whims of a steadfast Rose, to now lose every shred of meaning in the rest of his life? Joe must be the instrument of the devil. What of Tinker? Being the elderly of the two, surely he must be dead..? To have Joe run wild?

Alexander, for two short chapters, these were brilliant. Sigh!   

>>430349430349

Glad you liked them

Mm. So it goes - tragedy strikes and an opportunity beckons. I'm glad Tinker survived the stampede! Another excellent chapter, Alexander. Sigh! You have a decided knack for painting a plain, hard, rural life & how little there's kindness in that. Haunted, yet so very romantic. Can't wait to read more!

>>591681591681

You're too kind

I'm glad you enjoy it.

This story is getting interesting, I like where this is going!