• Member Since 7th Jul, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 21st, 2013

Invisible Cadance


Writer of horrible stories.

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Trixie travels through the roads until she arrives at a small village. There she’ll perform a show to redeem herself from her previous disasters. Have her previous experiences taught her anything, or is she stuck in her old ways?

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I don't really understand this story. Is it supposed to be about Trixie, or the OC's? Why are there names so strange? Is the conflict supposed to be about Trixie learning to be humble? Because she doesn't really do that. The situation just changes so that she can be humble more easily. She doesn't learn anything. I don't really understand what the other characters in the story are doing or why I should care about them. I don't want to be mean or anything, I just can't follow the chain of events. You don't have to explain it to me, I'm just alerting you to the fact it may need to be clarified.

Comment posted by F4D3 deleted Jun 7th, 2013
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