• Member Since 2nd May, 2013
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Spectra1


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Spectra and his friends Spitshine and Summerluck are among the last seven pony at their high school waiting to get picked up that day, and they soon realize that no pony is coming for them. Still, it doesn't seem so bad to spend the night at school, especially when distracting hot Finalkick and Silverbond are sleeping just down the hall. But then the power goes out, then the heat. The pipes freeze, and the roof shudders. As the days add up, the snow piles higher, and the empty halls grow colder and darker, the mounting pressure forces a devastating decision....

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 5 )

This is a well written and enticing story. :) I can't wait for the next chapter!

2580221 I'll post a new 1 every day or two. ill post chapter 6 today :D

Hmm. The characters are set, the struggle is explained. Tension is steadily rising, and foreshadowing is almost complete. You've done a great job helping us visualize everything

2585922 Thank You! Chapter 7 will be out in a few days, though... its a pretty long chapter

you should work on chapter 7 , we cant wait to read the next chapter and the reset to come. :twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::raritystarry:

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