Now now, don't worry. Just make sure to pace yourself and the story. You'll be fine. No pressure. Just make sure to relax. Consider that doctor's orders.
If you don't feel like your writing's up to stuff take your time, but from my perspective everything seems to be in excellent form and I would enjoy more of the story if you wouldn't mind updating.
377612 It'd be a bit late to reconsider extending the fic into a multichapter now. Anyhow, I'm working on the next chapter as you read this. I just hope I can take this slowly enough...
ok this fic is great but im a little put off that spike appears to be completly human i thought he would at least have slitted eyes and mabey some patches of scales that kinda blended in with his skin
439411 While he is completely human, he does have a few features that set him apart. You will find out more about them in the next chapter. I guess I made him completely human for simplicity's sake. Any disapproval expressed is because of age difference and not caused by some sort of cultural squick against relationships of the intimate nature with dragon/human hybrids. It never actually entered my mind to give him scales or anything, to be honest.
Amaizing job you got here man. Even though I don't support this couple, nor the fact of humanize the characters, I found myself totally angeaged by the story. It's well written, very detailed and the characters are great to. I also love the way you brought the Romance factor into the picture, from both the sides of the adolescent and the mature woman. And youre right. Not everyne has the chance to have their firt time with someone they love. Hope to read more.
Again another great job!! What are you talking about the characterization was spot on, I thougt I was reading a script for the show rather then a fanfic, hopefully you get to work on this soon because I really want to see where this goes. SO MUCH DRAMA. can't wait!! Chow Bennet out.
It's now a multi-part story? Yay!
multi-parted. all of my yes.
As long as this dont get to out of control youll be fine thumbs up I have a good feeling.
I fucking love this story bro, keep it up!
... and let's face it, everybody's doin' Rainbow Dash. That girl's gotta slow down.
More seriously though, looking forward to continuations of this.
Keep this story going, its hard to find good Spike-fiction and you're a good writer.
Now now, don't worry. Just make sure to pace yourself and the story. You'll be fine. No pressure. Just make sure to relax. Consider that doctor's orders.
A spike centric romance story, sign me up :3
If you don't feel like your writing's up to stuff take your time, but from my perspective everything seems to be in excellent form and I would enjoy more of the story if you wouldn't mind updating.
I'm not normally much into humanized, but this is an excellent fic!
Curious to find out what happens next...
This is actually really good, and I'm so happy you decided to continue it! MOAR PLEASE!!!!!
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That makes two of us.
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It'd be a bit late to reconsider extending the fic into a multichapter now. Anyhow, I'm working on the next chapter as you read this. I just hope I can take this slowly enough...
If you do not continue this, I think I'll kill myself. Please finish the next chapter soon
one thing, ehem, MOOOOOAAAARRRRRR!!!!!
Oh man this is great.
I LOVE IT ALL OF MY THUMBS UP TAKE THEM
ok this fic is great
but im a little put off that spike appears to be completly human
i thought he would at least have slitted eyes and mabey some patches of scales that kinda blended in with his skin
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While he is completely human, he does have a few features that set him apart. You will find out more about them in the next chapter.
I guess I made him completely human for simplicity's sake. Any disapproval expressed is because of age difference and not caused by some sort of cultural squick against relationships of the intimate nature with dragon/human hybrids. It never actually entered my mind to give him scales or anything, to be honest.
I hope the next chapter Rainbow Dash going to seduce Spike
Found this by accident again and I was all like: "What? He's made another chapter?"
Then all of my happy came onto my face in the form of a grin while I read.
Good damn show so far, gent. Good damn show. Keep it up, Please!
Feel free to update ASAP, don't worry I won't be mad ;3
So much awesomeness!
440668sorry to ask but are you ever gona update
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Patience is a Virtue. The next chapter is 2.5k words long so far; hopefully, it will be 5k by the time it's finished.
The waiting's worth it, it always is
Amaizing job you got here man. Even though I don't support this couple, nor the fact of humanize the characters, I found myself totally angeaged by the story. It's well written, very detailed and the characters are great to. I also love the way you brought the Romance factor into the picture, from both the sides of the adolescent and the mature woman. And youre right. Not everyne has the chance to have their firt time with someone they love.
Hope to read more.
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Wow, that's really some of the highest praise I've received so far. Thank you.
why do you always disagree with your fans?
Again another great job!! What are you talking about the characterization was spot on, I thougt I was reading a script for the show rather then a fanfic, hopefully you get to work on this soon because I really want to see where this goes. SO MUCH DRAMA. can't wait!! Chow Bennet out.
424932 WHAT HE SAID oh and nice avatar it made me laugh