Equestria is generally at peace, true, there are some problems from time to time, but ultimately Harmony and peace prevail. But what if the darkness, that always fights with the Light grows stronger and one perceived defeated enemy rises again without notice?
Why is acting Carrot Top so strange lately and how is it possible that Prince Blueblood is acting more hostile than normal?
Please note, that english isn't my first language.
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Mm. This needs a lot of work. If you're not a native speaker, that's understandable, but I won't go easy on you.
You're probably just playing with words, but it's really the other way around. Don't forget to capitalize.
Harmony and peace prevail. Only add the s when your subject is singular.
Like here. That should be fights.
Ah, there we go.
That's a question, and it needs a question mark.
Capitalize prince because it's a title. That means you'd capitalize King Henry but not Henry the king.
More hostile than normal. Then is for events happening in sequence, than is for comparisons. Normally isn't modifying anything, so you want the non-adverb form.
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There's no need to go easy on me, because only through feedback I'll be able to improve.
Thanks for the pointers, I edited the description and (hopefully) fixed all errors