A teenager gets transported to Ponyville after a freak accident but how is it going to end
Found some errors, You used Hands instead of hooves in the clop scene with Dash, and also some spelling errors. Other then that good good and more good.
That was awesome beyond awesome
it would have been better if she keep saying oh my gosh
Found some errors, You used Hands instead of hooves in the clop scene with Dash, and also some spelling errors. Other then that good good and more good.
That was awesome beyond awesome
it would have been better if she keep saying oh my gosh