My Little Shy

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Corwin Freiss

Corwin Freiss #1 · May 23rd, 2013 · 2 · ·

I don't know. While Rainbow wanting Fluttershy as a pet seems like an understandable concept and Rainbow wouldn't even spet out of her character, reversing the roles means that Fluttershy went downright psycho (all the more with that feeling-supressing-thingy).

It became a bit too dark for my taste and definitely not kind of story I hoped for from the first chapter BUT it is still very well written, so I will give it a chance (although if you decide to stick to original direction, I wouldn't mind at all )

RedScootaloo

RedScootaloo #2 · May 23rd, 2013 · · ·

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Fluttershy's going crazy now. I'm awaiting that she turns out to be Pinkie from 'Cupcakes'. That'd give this whole thing a weird, yet awesome touch.

Like, what the fuck? still 4/5 Big Mac's tho

Honey Heart the filly

Honey Heart the filly #3 · May 26th, 2013 · · ·

All of my this. Like, holy crap, I wasn't expecting any positive push from the direction I was looking at going. Nothing like this at all. I was expecting to have to trash the story after that, which I know, I shouldnt've posted it with that expectation, but really, I couldn't make it work the way I wanted it to, and it worked out a lot better in my head this way. It probably won't double back later and go back to original design, but thank you for the support :D

I will address that Fluttershy will be a lot more like the Fluttershy from the Iron Will episode than normal, but it won't be so out of character that she won't look like Fluttershy at all, if I can help it.

lillytheomegawolf

lillytheomegawolf #4 · Jun 2nd, 2013 · · ·

interesting....
The first chapter was kinda cool. I could see there was nice room for some lovely Flutterdash action coming up, perhaps even that night kind of thing.

but now... um... question... Is this going to be a Flutterdash story (I dont mind clop, or a bit of gore... if theres my fave ship involved romantically.) or just one where Fluttershy dominates Rainbow like some pet and they never get to have a proper relationship?.

After an explosive start im now aprehensive as to where this will go. For now you get a downvote and a follow but Im open for change. So here's hoping.