Ponysona:Friendship is Magic

by ChocoIceCream

Before the Move

Daylight.

That was the first thing Facade Mask saw when he woke in the morning.

He stared at his clock on the table.

...7:00 A.M

-Wake up early?-

YES
-->NO

"Sweet Celestia," He muttered, "It's so bucking early... *Yawn* "

He lied down on his bed again, trying to sleep.

---

ONE HOUR AND A HALF LATER

Daylight, again.

Facade stared at his clock, once again.

...8:30 A.M

-Wake up?-

-->YES
NO

"Okay," Facade muttered, "I'll get up now..."

---

"Mom," Facade called out, "I'm up!"

"I'll go make some breakfast," His mom called, "Hay and Oats or Waffles?"

HAY AND OATS
--> WAFFLES

"Uh... Waffles...?"

"Okay, coming right up!"

---

Facade sat down in the dining room thinking about stuff.

Particularly the fact he is moving to Ponyville tommorow. By himself. Alone, without his parents.

What's worse, he's going to to leave his home and friends in Manehattan.He kept thinking about why he was suddenly moving to Ponyville by himself.He was very sad and angry about this move.

---

"Facade, breakfast is ready!"

"Okay, mom!" Facade awoke from his session of thinking and wolfed down his food.

"Anything else?" His mom asked, making toast for Facade's brother.

-What will you ask about?-

-->MORE WAFFLES
THE MOVE
THE TIME

"Can I have more waffles?"

"Sure!"

-Obtained Waffles x5-

THE MOVE
-->THE TIME

"What time is it?"

"Oh! Here's a new watch I bought!"

-Obtained Watch-

-You can now check the time and date on your hoofwatch!-
-03/05 9:05 A.M

"Why am I moving to Ponyville by myself all of a sudden?"

"You're not moving by yourself. Your brother's gonna be with you."

"Mischief Mask is moving with me?!"

"Yup!" Mischief shouted, "I sure am!"

---

Bl00nbrst1510 is online
theBRO925 is online
theBRO925:wer's facad bro????
Bl00nbrst1510:I dont know!!!And it's spelled Facade.......
Facade710:Hey guys
theBRO925:facad bro!
Facade710:Facade.
Bl00nbrst1510:Told u.
theBRO925:hoo cares???????
Facade710:Hey I'm moving to ponyville tomorrow.
Bl00nbrst1510:Srsly man???
theBRO925:bro i tink hes sirius bro!!!but y bro???
Facade710:My mom said i was old enough to have my own house with my little bro
theBRO925:bro y not stay in a haus hir in maynhatan???
Facade710:I dunno,popularity issues?
Bl00nbrst1510:darn...
Facade710:gotta sleep early and prepare for the move bye!
Facade710 is offline

---

As Facade turned his computer off, he started to get a headache.

-Go to bed?-

-->YES
-->NO

"Goodnight, mom." Facade turned off the lights and jumped into bed.

"Have you already packed your things?" His mother asked.

"Yes," Facade answered, "I'm ready for the move tomorrow."

"Okay, goodnight."

---

...Where in Equestria am I? The grey stallion thought.

"Ah..." A bizarre-looking stallion with a long snout said, "It seems we have a guest with an intriguing destiny...

"Welcome to the Velvet Room. My name is Igor... I am delighted to make your acquaintance.

"This place exists between dream and reality, mind and matter... It is a room where only those who are bound by a 'contract' may enter... It may be that such a fate awaits you in the near future.

"Now then... Why don't you introduce yourself...?"

"My name is," The grey pony said, "Facade Mask."

"Hm..." Igor said, "I see.

"Now, let's take a look at your future, shall we?

"Do you believe in fortune telling, Facade Mask?"

YES
NO
-->KIND OF

Igor took the cards stacked on the table in front of him and spread them flat on the table. Facade was extremely confused that moment.

"Each reading is done with the same cards," Igor explained, "yet the result is always different... Life itself follows the same principles, doesn't it?

"Hm... The Tower in the upright position represents the immediate future. It seems a terrible catastrophe is imminent. The card indicating the future beyond that is... The moon in the upright position. This card represents "hesitation" and "mystery"... Very interesting indeed. It seems you will encounter a misfortune at your destination, and a great mystery will be imposed on you.

"In the coming days, you will enter into a contract of some sort, after which you will return here. The coming year is a turning point in your destiny... If the mystery goes unsolved, your future may be forever lost.

"My duty is to provide assistance to our guests to ensure that does not happen."

"Ahem." The mare beside Igor tapped his shoulder and glared.

"Ah!" Igor suddenly exclaimed "I have neglected to introduce my assistant to you. This is Maregaret. She is a resident of this place, like myself."

"My name is Maregaret," Maregaret introduced herself, "I am here to accompany you through your journey."

"We shall attend to the details another time," Igor said, "Until then, farewell..."

Well, that was weird... Facade thought as the Velvet Room faded and disappeared.

---

"YO!" A loud foalish voice screamed, "FACADE! WAKE UP!"

"M-Mischief?!" Facade exclaimed, "Where's that Igor guy and Maregaret?!"

"IGOR?! MAREGARET?! WHO IN EQUESTRIA ARE THOSE?! THIS IS ME MISCHIEF!"

"Stop shouting in my ear! Why'd you come, anyway?"

"I'm thirsty! Give me water!"

-->YES
NO

"Fine..."

---

"Facadeee!" Mischief half-shouted, "Who are these Igur and Nergaret anyway?!"

"Igor and Maregaret," Facade said, "They were from a dream I had until you woke me up screaming."

"Sheeeeeeeeeeesh! Anyway,what was your dream about?!"

"I was in a place called the Velvet Room. Then some long-snouted stallion named Igor and his assistant, Maregaret started talking about fortune telling, a contract, and stuff like that. Oh, and he said something about me having an 'intriguing destiny' or something like that. Weird, huh?"

"Woahhhhh! AWESOME!"

"Anyway, head back to bed it's already like, 10:30."

"Geez, who are you?! Mom?!"

"Goodnight." Facade slammed the door in Mischief's face.

---

Author's Note:

Hello, this is ChocoIceCream! This is my first fic here!
It's a crossover of MLP and the Persona series. Though not a retelling of P4, a lot of stuff will be here in this fic. This fic is also semi-game like.
Please give me suggestion about stuff like, the Main Six's personas, the supporter(the one that analyzes stuff)of the group, and who you think Facade's filly friend should be.
Facade's my OC for this fic. Sorry if he turns into a Gary-Stu! He's meant to represent the protagonists in the Persona series.

Comments

[Zman537]

you have an error in one of the descriptions.

They simply don't match. one says he is from Canterlot, the other says he's from Manehatten. I haven't read this yet so I'll start once that is fixed and some more chapters are released.

[TyHunter]

I really think this is an awesome Idea and you should keep writing. It's pretty well so far!

[Smiles]

The part at the end is really corny and uncreative. Just saying.

To be specific, where the protagonist reveals the supernatural event that just occurred to him like it was an every day occurrence is what I'm talking about.

[ChocoIceCream]

2502684
Oh, crap! My original idea was for him to be from Canterlot. I'll change it,sorry!

[ChocoIceCream]

2504027
Well, I ran out of things to write

[Smiles]

2504673

[ChocoIceCream]

2504685
Sorry, I'll try to write better chapters
That was a prologue, anyway

[Mamoru Kisho]

2504793 I had this same idea not 10 minutes ago. I hope you do well on this story.

That being said: "Welcome to the Velvet Room, my little ponies."

[Kuumatona]

2504793 Okay this has an interesting style which matches persona itself. I'd work on description and character a bit. AruShinichi is right about him no t having much reaction to it but it does have potential. I'm not an editor nor a great helper in development but I can spot a decent story. Not only the previous but it's uncommon so others will want to read it even if it's not super amazing top of the line writing but it does need to be good enough to stick. If you want any help go to [url= Overly-Extensive Editors ]http://www.fimfiction.net/group/197236/overlyextensive-editors once they are done with group renovations. They are according to the name people who are all about helping in editing and story writing. I don't know if it's any of the editors forte but someone should pick it up and help you. In the meantime Imma keep an eye on this story but I will not yet like or dislike it until I see more. so here is a cute pic.encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcQ5wiBZ8Y8Jzi18oKh3GjomGxMQV3B1BLEVfXh9jsHHrPe5TyUW2Q