When Bon-bon mysteriously shows up at Lyra's house in hysterics, it's up to the mint-colored unicorn to make things right. But after reflecting on their relationship, her feelings, and discovering shocking news, she discovers within herself the power to finally do the one thing she's always wanted to do.
Just a very short story with an ending open to interpretation. I may make a sequel of sorts if it gains any popularity.
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A rather well wrote chapter if I do say so myself, I usually can't visualise well as I read through some of these fics but I found this chapter easy to visualise, I hope you continue this story :)
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I'm glad to know I'm getting positive feedback. Thanks for reading!
I almost cried for some reason T__T
was a very well written story :)
Oh my I hope she wouldn't be rejected...
Continue it!!! Great story. Just please don't ruin it by making it too sexual..I prefer cute innocent ponies exploring their feelings, not ponies acting like humans and having sex an shit. Lol. But whatever you end up doing I'm gonna read it
oh god that cliffhanger has me ragung so hard to find out what happened next
i know however that this is exactly as you intended
good show sir
I really liked this. will read more of your stuff
story 100
I think there is a lot of potential for a sequel following Bon Bon's struggles with raising a foal, as well as figuring out how she truely feels about Lyra. Sort-of a coming of age story.