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Dec
16th
2015

Strange dream · 4:32pm Dec 16th, 2015

So last night I dreamed Twilight Sparkle (Alicorn: 'facepalms - what's wrong with me') showed up at Bag End at the beginning of the hobbit and was going to join Thorin's expedition to The Lonely Mountain; there was also an OC dwarf lawyer there who was coming for some reason.

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Apr
10th
2015

Change of order? · 4:16am Apr 10th, 2015

Limits of the Horizon is finished, but I was still wondering:

Do you think if I took the flashback of Rainbow Dash taking Sky Blaze to Zecora at the start of chapter six, and made it the a prologue before Vireo Vista telling about the attack in chapter one, that that would make the story better/ more gripping?

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Feb
10th
2015

TOC - I was wrong. · 8:14am Feb 10th, 2015

Until now in the Tournament of Canterlot I'd claimed that:

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Feb
8th
2015

Alternate Opening · 8:27am Feb 8th, 2015

I'm thinking of reworking the format of the first scene of LOTH to adding a bit of dialogue and make it a bit more intense; (and to subtly hint at the significance of Vireo's name.) thought the plot information remains the same.

Tell me if you think it's better than the version I have up now.

“…Tell me what happened Vera.”

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Dec
29th
2014

Tournament of Canterlot · 5:25am Dec 29th, 2014

I'm trying to organize a fundraiser for Syrian refugees, through making tournament for epic-length fictions to run throughout 2015.

Prizes are many, rules are few, and details are here.


Limits of the Horizon, (and planned sequels) are my entry to the tournament. Pass the word onto whoever you think might be interested and I hope to see you there. :twilightsmile:

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Oct
27th
2014

The power of words · 11:25am Oct 27th, 2014

Let's play a little experiment with words. Suppose you've never met me before, and I come onto some social media site and choose one of the following options to describe myself. What image would each description conjure in your mind, and how would they differ?

1. I'm a bad boy.

2. I'm a villain

3. I'm a sinner.

4. I'm naughty.

5. I'm not a good person.

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Oct
4th
2014

Slavery Disclaimer · 4:14am Oct 4th, 2014

Sep
10th
2014

Hint for Limits of the Horizon #1 · 4:19am Sep 10th, 2014

Does anyone know what the name Vireo Vista means?

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Jun
7th
2014

The Scenic Route - (Deleted Scene) · 7:50am Jun 7th, 2014

In the original draft of Chapter 3 - Inquest, in Limits of the Horizon; Twilight was going to take a detour through her mind palace between her Hall of Language, and her understanding of Zaharren Culture. Later I was advised that it made the chapter too long, and stretched the believable definition of a mind palace so I took it out, but I

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