Don't expect any updates for a while, since I'm rewriting most of the chapters and correct mistakes (I should have done that months ago). Based on the edits my editor made and some deleted content in Chapter 3 (might restore at some point) takes place at Season 3 but before the Battle of Tirek and the destruction of the Golden Oaks. I'm also adding a prologue for the heck of it, but will make sense in the next coupla chapters. I won't be writing anything today aside from this blog because I'll

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I'm not like those writers who can write up a chapter in a coupla hours. I was never the type of writer to write what people want, but I have to walk a balance between writing for myself and keeping people happy. Every time I publish a chapter, I end up getting more dislikes just because one of my main characters is an OC and the human tag. It's awfully discouraging and the comments I get I feel are outta pity. I KNOW that I suck at romance and clop is pretty much out of the question for me.

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Hebi here. I haven't been able to update anything in a coupla months, but credit to sunnypack for helping me out! Now that the first four chapters are done, I can tell you that chapters 5 and 6 are underway! I dunno why I even bother making these blogs, but I hafta assume that people are reading my work. Anyway, I wrote this after midnight, so I doubt that anyone would be up to read this.

I haven't been able to work on anything related to Sealed Fox:Lunar Sage, but I've been spendin' the week readin' Fallout:Equestria. Scratch that, I started readin FoE yesterday. Just because I haven't been able to work on it doesn't mean that I'm gonna stop working. I'm just taking a break, is all. Also, I've stopped announcing dates. It's no use publishing unrefined chapters only for the story to be downvoted.

Hebi here. (Ugh, I can't believe I took a page from Cave Johnson of all people) If you're wondering why I'm not working on SFLS, I'm taking a break. I'm working on oneshots and collabs to regain my creative juices and whatnot. Finals week is also coming up for me, so I'll be online, but not working on stories.

~Hebi

I'm not posting any new chapters until I finish Cookie's cameo, introducing Pinkie and Rarity, and adding a free jumpscare~ I could have chosen for John Doe to take on minotaur or dragon form, but no... I decided to take on the "human" form. It's not that I don't like it, but I chose it because explaining why he isn't a pony would be considered spoilers... I realized that I write slightly better at night.

I really can't think of anything else to do other than expand the chapter. I should spend more time writing new chapters and doing research instead of playing Skyrim, though. But don't worry: I won't delete the chapter, seeing as you saw it already. *yawn* Thanks and seeya later.

~Hebi

If you are readin' this, then I'm sorry for making you wait. I didn't mean to. As much as I would love to whine about not writing, I would rather be happy that this chapter is going underway and I had to use the show transcripts as a reference when I was writing Pinkie Pie. I was thinking of introducing Spike last chapter, but I have plans for him. Sweetie Belle, I consider to be a weapon of mass cute, but I'm not sure how to use Sweetie's cuteness as a weapon. Any ideas?

I know that my writing style is my own, but they seem like I write like someone else. This will be updated as the story advances and is not a gauge of my writing ability.

Prologue - Rudyard Kipling
Chapter 1 - H. P. Lovecraft
Chapter 2 - James Joyce
Chapter 3 - Dan Brown
Chapter 4 - James Joyce

If you've seen the new chapter and noticed that it's incomplete, that's because I've gone bonkers trying to finish it unpublished. I've also been playing FE: Awakening and am waiting for my copy of Alpha Sapphire. Compared to the first time I wrote this fic, I've gone a long way. Looking back, I'm glad I decided to rewrite the story. Granted that it wasn't very far, but the first draft was horrible compared to what I have now. And I still am searching for an editor, too. And I think I lost a

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I'm NOT forcing anyone to comment, but it would really be nice if I got feedback after finishing a chapter. I find it unfair that I get comments at least four months after I publish it. Even critiques would be great if you ask me.

Trust me, I'm NOT being exclusive, but Chapter 5's ready to read! From this point on, when a new chapter's finished, I'm going to make a quick blog about it. Plus, I should be promoting more often and pigs will fly if I get featured. Anyway, Chapter 5's ready. (I should have done this sooner.)

About the preview. I lied. That passage with Applejack and Pinkie talking with Twilight in the library? It didn't happen. Sorry about that. But I can tell you that the contents of the next chapter will involve Applejack and Twilight in some way.

~Hebi

Next time, on Sealed Fox: Lunar Sage...

"Come on...." Twilight turned the pages of the book Mythical Creatures from Another Time until a lightbulb lit up above her head. "It says in this book that humans are bipedal creatures that usually have short manes on their heads. They are capable of speech and wear clothes."

"But John doesn't talk!" Applejack countered. "Ah didn't hear her say anything."

"Wait, did you say that John's a filly?" Twilight inquired suspisciously.

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As you can see, I haven't been able to write anything lately because of life. Due to the Season 4 finale, I think I've realized that Lunar Sage diverges after the Season 2 finale. After that point, there is no mention of Sombra, the Crystal Empire or anything beyond that. But... I will mention changelings and put Discord in a cameo or two. But the drawback is that I can't use everypony as they are as of When the Sweetie Belle Tolls.

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If you go to my first story, you're wondering why everything else from the first chapter is gone. Well, I went over to Editors-R-Us to get help for Lunar Sage. When I came back, it turns out that there were so many plotholes and most of the characters were OOC. One thing's for sure, I did a great job with the first chapter.

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I joined the herd prior to my senior year at high school. I joined the site so that I can make a story out of my thoughts and improve my writing skill. It seems that comments are hard to obtain, especially at this point. But... I've noticed that not much has happened. As of now, I only have eight comments, fourteen likes and eleven dislikes. Oh, and three hundred twenty seven views. That's not too bad for my first story.

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Since I've been noticing all the 'lil monkeys reading the previous chapter before it's even published, here's a quick 'lil snip for you people:

Pinkie watched nervously as her friend sat down and looked at the brown gruel hungrily.
"Oatmeal! Are you crazy!?" Pinkie yelled.
"With chocolate!" Azul grinned at the mare after lifting the spoon with a flare of his horn and scooped the oatmeal.

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I remember when I started out, having no sleep and keeping awake by listening to music and reading here several months ago. The first two chapters had a great start, but... when I look at the last chapter, it's disappointing.

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At the very least, tell me WHY you disliked my story. I mean... I'm still an author who can only go so far with likes and views. No, seriously! I'm currently in writer's block at the worst possible time and I'm ranting, ain't I? Oh? Sorry. *cough*

I mean... Oh, I'm sorry. That last chapter wasn't supposed to be posted two days ago.