Double Trouble: The Flaws Within has been reviewed! · 4:21pm Mar 15th, 2020
Should anypony be interested, Cyonix from My Little Reviews & Feedback has done a rather in-depth review of Double Trouble: The Flaws Within1. You can read it it here:
Should anypony be interested, Cyonix from My Little Reviews & Feedback has done a rather in-depth review of Double Trouble: The Flaws Within1. You can read it it here:
Pretty much finished with revisions and updates. Double Trouble is ready and raring to go.
Well, the time has finally come, I’m afraid. The time every author must dread:
Editing.
No, no. Not editing as in “Boy, that’s a lot of missed commas” or “Can’t believe I misspelled [X] that many times!”.
No. Editing as in “Let’s whitewash some of the Sistine Chapel’s roof”.
I’m sure most, if not all, of you have noticed the rather lengthy gap between earlier chapters and the latter ones. This often happens when, during that interval, your doctor looks at you upon releasing you from the hospital and says, “We didn’t think you were going to make it.” . . .
Four different times.
It’s been about 9 months since my last hospital stay, and--with crossed hooves--hopefully I’m due for a very long break before another one.
Well, here I go. Twenty-four hours after posting my very first ever MLP fanfic. It's not my first ever story, but my first go at writing a fanfic for MLP:FIM.
Alas, it seems I've already been thumbed-down once. Ah well, it happens. I'd just like to know why. It's hard to learn from mistakes without getting feedback.