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Double Trouble Update · 2:23am Dec 23rd, 2019
Chapters 1 thru 11 have been updated. Basically the chapters have been edited for typographical, grammatical and formatting errors, and minor revised for descriptions, speech, etc.
Working on Chapter 12 now.
What had not been revised are the details in the first two chapters. I understand that annoyed (understandably so) several readers before. However, buried within those descriptions are things that, much later in the story, become extremely important for the story’s continuation and subsequent conclusion. I felt, and still feel, that leaving those details to wait until they become necessary would be deus ex machina. As for AJ’s accent . . . ::sigh:: If . . . if! . . . the neighs (::grins::) outweigh the yays, I may go back and edit her speech.
