Double Trouble: The Flaws Within has been reviewed! · 4:21pm Mar 15th, 2020
Should anypony be interested, Cyonix from My Little Reviews & Feedback has done a rather in-depth review of Double Trouble: The Flaws Within1. You can read it it here:
Double Trouble: The Flaws Within Review
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1Seems like I'm the biggest flaw within
Oh gosh, I never meant to create that impression!
I suppose I do focus a little too much on problems in my reviews, it's something I've been struggling with a lot when I write these things. Though honestly, it's difficult to look at a story as long as I've looked at yours and not get fixated on anything flawed
I know. But there is more than a kernel of truth to that, too. I'm used to writing fiction: Science Fiction & Fantasy, but, as I've been learning, fanfiction is a somewhat different bushel of oats. Readers of fanfiction have different expectations than do readers of authors like Mercedes Lackey and David Weber (who just--entirely incidentally, of course --happen to be my two favorite authors).
Based upon that juxtaposition, I really can't disagree with a single thing you've noted. It's just, I think, it felt as if there was little to like about the story as compared to what was lacking. Then again, it has given me a great deal of insight and information, and, to be honest, it's not as if others have not noticed, and commented on, the very self-same things.