Comments, if you please?

Chapter 12 has been published. Six additional ones are in varying states of completion. At least one more should be published before the end of the year.

If you would, I would be deeply appreciative of comments and critiques, whether publicly posted or privately messaged. It doesn’t have to be long; something as short as “I really liked the scene when...” or “I got confused about...”. Although I principally write for my own enjoyment and satisfaction, no small part of either of those is genuinely derived from feeling I’ve written stories that readers have enjoyed, something I can’t derive without feedback.

So, should you wish to do so, I would be sincerely grateful.

~Masterius