Revise the Fallen · 3:42pm Apr 1st, 2017
The last chapter of Unfriendly Competition is... hopefully improved. Thank you to everyone who took the time to explain the issues with the original, or just express your displeasure. (I'm pretty sure this was the first time I've ever actually dreaded getting notifications.) It's nice to know that I have readers unafraid to tell me when I've screwed the pooch.