And here we are, adding what could be pretty much the director's commentary to the story. Bear in mind this is a point-by-point review, so if you haven't read An-Twan Star's Review first (link here), I really recommend you to do so.
So, here it is:
Review for my expanding Recomendation List
The Flight of the Alicorn by Ponydora Prancypant
Tags: Adventure, Romance
Okay, first of all, give the man a follow if you enjoy this. Seriously, An-Twan Star may not be one of the site's celebrities, but he does have three very well written stories under his pen.
And don't miss my own reply to this (link here). Because I can't shut the f up when it comes to talking about writing, and because it does bring a good share of points I would like to address.
Pony genetics is a subject which has (arguably) been over-analysed to death following Mr Cake’s explanation in season 2 episode 13:
However this is maybe worth revisiting following the new development in season 6: the first natural-born alicorn in Equestria.
Shepherd tries to Help Twilight Sparkle
After Twilight Sparkle ascended to Alicorn, and became a Princess, her relationship with Shepherd didn't change too much. He was already a knight assigned as the guard for the Elements of Harmony after all. He did have a lot more duties involving her though. Unfortunately they usually involved paperwork.
Yep I'm still here.
Quick update on my Part.
1. Like 15 new Ideas for the "Red Line" of my Story? - Check ✅
--> Crazyness and Op alicorns involved? Hey, what did you think this Story is?😂
2. Even a new Idea for a one shot story? (maybe? After all this Story should have been a one shot too xD) - Check ✅
--> might write and post that one before the next chapter of The Alicorn Book
I published chapter 9, The Command, in The Runaway Bodyguard.
The new story’s title begins with Messing with an Alicorn... Get hype. Comment.
Note: The background of the images in this story is licensed from PIXTA. #11315199 is copyrighted by Yoc-chan Hiss.
The last two weeks have been insane!
I have Legend of Zelda Wilders of Harmony part 2 outlined and I am aiming to finish and post it Sunday night, there are a few details and character shenanigans I need to Iron out.
In the meantime you might enjoy my friend Rego's work:
Written because I am sick and tired of Immortal Twilight fics. Sorry.
My thoughts on immortality are pretty simple. Immortality is not a blessing. It's a CURSE. I know some people might disagree, but that's what I think. Why do I think that?
Because you would remain young and handsome (or beautiful for the ladies) while the rest of your friends, family, other loved ones will continue to age and eventually die. That alone is a fate worse than death.
Some months ago, I talked about Cleverpun's Break Away collaboration. The premise of the story is that the Princesses have come up with a plan to destroy the Alicorn Amulet - it is too powerful to simply be snapped in half, but every time a pony willingly defies its power, it loses a bit of its strength.
So... interesting fact about me: I get most of my more awesome ideas while asleep or when I'm lying in bed about to go to sleep. That being said, I'm also a fan of Rage Reviews and if I had more time on my hands I'd probably be a fairly frequently posting Rage Reviewer
I should ad an intro here, but to be honest, I'll give the spotlight to the guy who did actual work here:
Doing things a bit different here, and reading someone else's fic! Since I didn't write it, I have had a hard time getting a feel for what music to use, but, I hope what I've got here has been satisfactory~
Hello and welcome to Wave Blaster's blog, where Linkara is ripped off too.
Well, a lot of you guys may be wondering when is going to be an update *dodges a flying ax* and some of you may want my head for taking this long. The thing is that nightwalker and I have been working on something big, really big, and we both agree it needed to be worked on for a while without time pressures. I apologize if the waiting time has been a little long *dodges a flying kukri* okay, okay, Valve like long.
The riddle was "I am solid. I am liquid. I am life, but I am also death. I am red. I am black. People often find the look of me horrid. What am I?"
The answer was "blood".
My answer was "Black and red alicorn OC".
Way off the mark, huh? At the least, technically I'm not wrong.
Hey everyone. I'm gonna be shooting out a lot of stuff in this blog so bare with me here. I'm mainly going to be talking about Order of the Alicorn, but first let me talk for just a little bit about Sweetie Devil.
Come preview Chapter 4 of Pink Alicorn Blues today on the StalkerCast on Picarto TV here. Chapter 4 won’t be out until next Friday, so you’ll get the exclusive FIVE DAYS ahead of schedule!
The livecast preview starts at 1:00 pm Pacific Time.
Early stages in development:
That blogpost that started it all
Deleted scene from when the fic was meant to be dark comedy (yes, you read that right)
Reviews:
Please give them a good read and comment. These guys did a very amazing job at pulling the fic apart and examining it.
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