Redacted · 3:45am Sep 2nd, 2014
I posted this way too late at night. ^^;
Will repost in the morning!
For now! Redacted!
Well alright, a preview!
I posted this way too late at night. ^^;
Will repost in the morning!
For now! Redacted!
Well alright, a preview!
I spent last night thinking about the rejection as well as what all of you said. So thank you thank you so much for helping me. Some comments irritated me but most made me smile and reminded me why it is that I write.
I submitted Mother to Twilight's library it was rejected. Here is the rejection. I'm a bit... upset about it... Maybe I should take a break.
Rejecting Mother
Read: chapter 1
Proofing was fine apart from "Golden Oaks library" needing a capital 'L' and a sentence-starting 'for' near the end of one of the earlier paragraphs needing to be capitalized.
However, to understand the problem I have with this story, we will need to examine the facts as shown by the prologue:
Sorry all, Unfortunately I have something wrong with me. The doctors aren't sure what but it's causing really bad pain in my legs. Makes it difficult to write. So I'm not sure when I'll have anything ready. I'm on some strong pain killers and will be writing when I can. I'm really sorry. I'm tagging Mother because well it's the best way to make sure the majority of my readers see it and because Mother and Gods is what I'll be working on. So I wish I could give more info but it's all a huge
First of all, let me quickly assure you all that this is not a notice of cancellation! I adore writing Mother, and I promise not to do that to you guys or myself. That being said obviously this is NOT the next chapter which will be called Questions and Answers. What is this then? Well, this is your chance. I know all of you have questions you want Celestia to answer either for Luna or Twilight. So here's the deal in the comments of this not a chapter tell me what questions you have that you
Chapter two has just been posted! Enjoy!
Mother Chapter Two is now with the editor!
I have a surprise for all of you. Expect the next Chapter before next Sunday Titled Twilight Awakens. And sometime soon after that a wonderful surprise.
See you soon!
Coming in First place to be updated is Mother!
They knew they'd win just look at that grin on Twi's face!
I have completed my epic body swap story The Daydreamer's Nightmare. Please read if you haven't yet ^^
I need to get back to work on one of my other epics but sadly my schedule was destroyed due to the contest. Therefore you get to decide which story is next to update.
Mother
Starving
Twilight Moon
What if God were on of us.
Please comment with your vote! The winner will be announced via another cross post blog July 4th!
The Bonus chapter for mother is complete just awaiting editing but here is a unedited sneak peek!
Twilight wasn’t sure what was taking her baba so long to reach her mouth. She let out a small cry reminding the white mare holding her who was in charge. baba, now, mine. She glimpsed a look of fear in the mare’s eyes but it vanished quickly. A smile had quickly replaced the frightened look. Twilight began suckling the nipple that was put to her lips. Mmm, that was better.
Hello All! As some of you know I am competing in the body swap contest with my story The Daydreamer's Nightmare
It's a body swap story with Luna and Celestia. I'd love to get more input on it so if any of you have the chance take a look at it?
Also as i'm tagging Mother in this post I have the results of the poll
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The Winner is a memory from Twilight's infancy!
Hi guys! (and girls)
As some of you know i'm participating in the Body swap contest with my story The Daydreamer's Nightmare. That contest ends on July first so I have a little over two weeks to finish. Now with that said I have received 4 comments in the past week or so either assuming Mother is dead or asking for more. So here's what i'm going to do!
My apologies to every pony. I have been mostly just reading the last little while and grieving. On the 14th my mother in law died after a long time of suffering a massive stroke some 9 years ago. My husband has needed me to be strong for him thus I have been. Now I am back. I have been convinced by a few people including my editor to try the body swap contest. Therefore that is what I am working on at this time.
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just received Mother back from my editor. The new better edited version is now up please enjoy!
Sooooo Hi! Um wow I really don't don't what to say just THANK YOU!!!