Jun
22nd
2014
Sneak peek · 3:54pm Jun 22nd, 2014
The Bonus chapter for mother is complete just awaiting editing but here is a unedited sneak peek!
Twilight wasn’t sure what was taking her baba so long to reach her mouth. She let out a small cry reminding the white mare holding her who was in charge. baba, now, mine. She glimpsed a look of fear in the mare’s eyes but it vanished quickly. A smile had quickly replaced the frightened look. Twilight began suckling the nipple that was put to her lips. Mmm, that was better.
Chapter due out tomorrow I hope you all enjoy!
need a pre-reader for all of this?
2226146
Funny you should ask i'm actually looking for a prereader for all of my stories if you are interested? You don't need to worry about editing I have one of the best.
what's suppose to be the difference?
2226154
It's a pretty nice job I do it for a few people.
Read the chapters tell me if they make sense why or why not what you liked what you didn't mild editing. And first look privileges of all chapters.
2226158 alright, if you would mind checking out some of my stories and possible edit them if you have the time
2226178
I'm not a great editor... Actually I rather suck at it but i'd be willing to checkout your stories! If you are interested in being a prereader just send me a PM.