Oh, another forgettable story. Yeah, this one tried to pull off something similar to Equestria's Nutella Troubles, but with Ramen instead. Didn't work.
(I just couldn't wait until Wednesday, now could I?
)
What? Was there something that was supposed to happen that Wednesday?
Neat. I last updated this thing almost exactly three years ago. Also, reboot!
What dis? It's the beginning of a new era in my stories here on Fimfic!
Hmm, a story that has its lore based on some kind of tragic event that happened to the main character that results in them thinking they've been in Equestria all this time before they ultimately wake up in a completely different world? Now where have I heard of that?
AKA the story that was meant to be like What If but at the same time like these toasty lil' reviews.
It started off as a pretty decently funny idea, but it kinda went downhill from there. 
Vinyl's score? 3/10. If dubstep isn't allowed, it isn't worth it. Also, the ponies were rather rude when they kicked her overboard.
AKA, one of the reasons why I don't like writing commissions for people.
Also, the guy who requested the commish has been banned for quite a while now, so I'm just gonna assume it's fine to talk about what went down.
Crazy's back on the menu, boys!
Now, obviously, with how heckin' long this thing is, I'm not gonna do a chapter-by-chapter review like the past couple stories. We'll just cherrypick some chapters instead, 'cause these ain't serious reviews and I'd might as well skew it one way or another at some point since these are my own stories. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
Oh neat, another old flagship!
Wherever I look, I can't escape it... The Pony-Me universe...
Fog on the Window's more or less a copy-pasted piece of the full Pony-Me taken out and given a bit more polish before being published on its own. To be honest, the inclusion of MLP into this thing was more or less shoehorned-in.
Hello all.
Now that I'm getting back to a more even keel on my writing, I've decided it's probably time to cast the net for available editors and art-folks. I've not had a team of peeps to work with or talk to in a while, so this is probably a long time coming.
O hecc. I wrote an age-regression comedy?
Geez, I wasn't good at self-editing at all back then. Seems like I was also the type of author who made up excuses for why they didn't fix the problems or improve all that much, either.
"YOU!" she yelled, "TWILIGHT, YOU... YOU MISTAKE...ER, LOOK AT WHAT YOU DID TO MY SISTER!"
*snerk*
I just don't feel like myself if I don't have any toast!
Rating system? What rating system? I'm here to roast your toaster and rock your stories into the ground!
For the first round, let's start simple and take a look at my first story on this humble site:
I should start tagging the stories in question here. Why wasn't I doing that before?
Anyway, here's today's story:
Yup. Fifth story in and we're already on a sidestory. Though, that isn't bad, per say. Just an observation.
Anyway, without further ado, let's jump right into tearing this thing apart! (Or maybe you do want more ado?)
Oh. We're already on the first reboot?
So this darn diddly thingamabob was actually a 4-way collab of sorts. Story died when everyone else lost interest, as collabs do. It's why I don't normally do them anymore.
Anyway, let's get right into it.
Darkness.
Another? Already? Guess so. I hope you've got your seatbelts on kids, 'cause we're in for a hecuva wild ride with this fic!
I like how I decided to just tack on [and painfully] at the end there in the short description. Really helps with the screeches of "LOOK I'M A COOL DUDE WITH DARK THEMES IN HIS STORIES RIGHT???" in these early stories.
So, we've finally gotten to this story, haven't we?
Yeah, I almost forgot I was doing these too!
Meet the edgy little edgelord stepsibling of Pony-Me that was quite literally yeeted out of the chapters of Pony-Me after it got too edgy for its own good.
Short to say, I'm glad I decided to separate these chapters from the original story and dump 'em into a separate fic.
O hecc. I skipped over this on accident. Whoopsies.
Right off the get-go, this story was a massive shift from what I'd previously written, and what I would say was my first "flagship story" of sorts. For one, the story is based fully within existing MLP lore, with me only tacking on my own bits afterward, rather than vice-versa.
Neat. It's the first story I wrote that actually stuck around on my top 4 stories list on my about page for a decent amount of time. It took ages for another story to come around and boot it off the list. 
This was very much a one-off story I wrote because I could back in the day. Nowadays it probably would've popped up as an entry in What If instead, but eh.
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