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Howdy folks,
Not entirely sure I'm following instructions 100% here, but said to post here for general help so bear with me. I'm having problems with characterization and some punctuation errors in regards to semicolons (and probably some other stuff). Not sure if this a dead group or if review help isn't given anymore but I'll take a chance. In Bello Praesidium is the link/name of the story, even though I pointed out the specifics anything would be helpful.
Very Respectfully,
Wooliewarrior
I am told my writing is something of interest, but no verbal feedback has really gotten to me about the final part of my Card Trilogy. This is especially important because of the structure and purpose of the text of the final piece. As a gift, I present Cards of Finality, and I only ask for comments in return.
I'm in the process of writing a story that will most likely go on for quite a while, and it's designed to have a bunch of complex systems like an RPG. Right now, I have plans, but first, my character is a 12-year-old earth pony female, who's also dead. And she's getting reborn, with new parents because her old ones were killed by bandits. I've decided to have her have a new race, but it's going to either be a dragon or a hybrid of a dragon and one other race. What I want help with is choosing what she'll be a hybrid with, if she will be at all. I have a [url= https://strawpoll.com/54pxwf5p]poll for this, and I have a spreadsheet detailing the races and their various statistics. Please vote on this poll.