Family? Friends? Country? Updraft, an Enclave officer undercover in the Wasteland, is forced to rethink his relationships with his old life and his new. And what will he do if the fates of ponies rest on his decision? Will he choose wisely?
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The Final Line:
I get the sense this could being:
1. Muddy has gone on multiple iterations of this mission and essentially enjoys killing others (Wasteland Serial Killer of sorts)
2. Same as above but the government itself sanctions it to help with population control and a type of eugenics (Being the son of an important officer, and not capable of front-line duty would mean he'd survive. Instead use them as guinea pigs
3. Silver is either a deserter, turncoat, refugee of sorts who left the Enclave but knew Muddy before.
4. Silver was the actual target of this mission and was meant to have no witnesses, so although Dust wasn't a target he became one by walking in
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I will neither confirm nor deny any of your guesses, but I will say that the end of the chapter was meant to lead you to really think about what it all could mean.
Thanks for sticking with the story! More to come
Hey. I just wanted to say that I love this story. It's very well written and I can't wait for more chapters.
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Thanks for the feedback and thanks for the watch.
I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far... and I hope you enjoy what is to come. I hope to have the next chapter cleaned up and posted by the end of the week, but we'll see if life gets in the way again.
Again, thanks and keep enjoying it!