All of the fat ponies :)

Nice. This is a pretty great start to the story. There were a few typos here and there, and some weird sentences, but nothing too major. You also seem to confuse your it's and its a lot. Other than that, the characters, fetish description, pacing and setting were great.

It's always nice to see a fat fetish story with actual conflict and plot. Can't wait to see more!

Ay son let's bring the fat horse to the apocalypse

Cannot wait for more!!!

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I still don't know how the hell its/it's works. I will make it my goal tonight to figure it out and edit the correct usage in. There's really no excuse for me not to.

That said, thanks! Glad you liked it.
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Soooon~

Now this is a FimXFallout crossover I can fully get behind. Keep up the good work!

Hey Jinxabelle showed up, yay!

Now to wait to see if her profession shows up in the story, or if she's just a random soon-to-be-fatty.

All about that base.

This is actually quite the entertaining fic so far. I appreciate how the main characters all seem likable and entertaining to read about, in particular Shooting Star, she's a very interesting protagonist. In addition, I'm also really digging how this definitely feels a lot like how a situation like this would go within the universe of FO:E (or just Fallout in general, really.)

Good job with the descriptions, too. I really like how you describe fat accumulation and how stuffed they feel after eating.

Also, bravo with the pun-tastic title. ^^

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You're too kind. I'm glad to hear the characters are well received, one of my worries was that my characterization was poor. (It is, and I still need to work on it, but thanks).

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Mhm, no problem. ^^ Super stoked for the next part.

I love you and I love this.

I really love this, can't wait to see what happens next!

Always love your stories, will there be more? I've enjoyed it thoughroly so far

Is this story going to be updated soon? Or is my IPad broken and I just can't see the 3rd chapter

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Soon!

5994400 How soon?

Just a reminder that we're waiting patiently for the next installment.

Also, fuck yeah, Fallout 4's been announced, hells yeah.

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Some less patiently than others. I'm about to burst from anticipation

This will end in fat.

You haven't forgotten this story, have you?

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Not soon enough

Excuse me, but if you still check FiMFiction or are active, do you think you'd mind updating this story? I don't have too high hopes seeing as you haven't even logged on for two weeks but damn if this story doesn't deserve another chapter.

>.> i can let leostar or titanium ember be used if you're taking ponies

I can imagine the sequel to this:
Shooting Star in: ATTACK OF THE TREADMILLS FROM ABOVE!

This story really needs an update or two since it has been so long.
Edit: I have read to blog post and eagerly await for more.

The literal Hunger Games, it seems.