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Xhoral1865


Hi, I'm Xhoral. I attempt to write stories. Wish me luck!

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[THIS STOY IS COMPLETE ON DEVIANT ART. IF YOU WANT TO KNOW THE ENDING CHECK OUT THE LINK. -TigerSwirl]

This is a story about a misfit. A misfit who was born from magic and destined for greatness. She starts as a servant with nothing to her name and later becomes a knight that saves Medieval Equestria from the forces of evil. Join Windy Belle on her quest for answers as she battles daemons in her dreams, discover answers to her mysterious birth, and end the tyranny of a darkness that was thought to be long dead.

What secrets will she uncover? What was the reason for her magical dreams? Can a war finally end the tyranny of one dark soul or will Equestria perish before it? This is the story of Lady Windy Belle, Lady Knight of the Crystal Empire and hero of Canterlot.


- Cover art done by me ^^'
- Edited & Proofread by: Xhoral1865 & Conner Gordon
- The dark parts happen at the end of Part 2 of this story.
- Second Generation OCs used in this story belong to HazuraSinner .

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My name is Sasha, I was found in the Metro tunnels by a man named Artyom, my father. I am unlike everyone else of the Metro, for I am not human... but a pony. I have saved the Metro many times against the threat of the mutants and bandits. But my normal flow of life has been disrupted lately... I have been having strange visions and dreams, and one sentence I keep hearing... "Come home, Twilight..."

A darker take on the "My Little Dashie" style of story, featuring the Metro 2033 universe, starring Artyom, Twilight and the rest of the main cast of MLP: FIM

A short, multi-chapter story to try get me back into the way of writing!

Edited by Xhoral1865

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This story is a sequel to Fashion Crush


(Humanized) Vincenza Scratch, AkA Vinyl for her friends, AKA DJ-PON3 on stage, 22 years old. The DJ found herself in one of the low periods of her young career, probably the lowest and longest she ever experienced so far; writer's block, out of ideas for a new genre of music as her 'classic' electronica seems to go out of the crowd fashion, less and less attendance to her gigs, etc.

Starting to run low on money, She gets in touch with one of her mother's friend in the capital, Vito Philharmonica; Member of the board of one of the most prestigious private high school. Vito offers her a place to stay and a job to help her to get back on track : A music teacher job for a Highschool senior class, which includes Vito's own daughter, Octavia.

How's Vinyl going to teach to a bunch of teenagers when she's barely older than them? ( and probably not much more mature as well). And when other teachers and some of her students look down at her for being a 'simple' DJ? One answer, Becoming the GTVS: THE GREAT TEACHER VINYL SCRATCH! (Yes inspired by GTO, one of the coolest manga ever)

Fanart for the story on tumblr or on DA!

Don't forget to check the comic version as well

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[THIS STORY IS CANCELLED. I HAVE LEFT FIMFICTION AND WON'T COMPLETE IT HERE. PERHAPS I'LL FINISH IT ON DEVIANT ART. SORRY FOR NOT COMPELTEING IT. -TigerSwirl]

For many years the city of Cloudsdale changes and now it's going through the biggest change of all. City wide surveillance and security all thanks to a mysterious group of mysterious terrorists that attacked Cloudsdale twelve years prior and left a horrible scar on the people. One of those scarred souls is Rainbow Dash. While the street level fills with fear and corruption, Rainbow stays up high above the streets in the roof tops where there is peace and freedom. It was here in the roof tops that she and Applejack created a big courier business for those that the security calls enemies of the city. Whatever the message or parcel the client sends, it will be delivered discreetly and on time.

One day Rainbow was given a parcel from a mysterious new customer with a huge pay check. Without a second thought she delivers the parcel herself only to help in putting away an innocent woman behind bars for the disappearance of one of Equestria’s Princesses, Princess Mi Amore Cadenza. Rainbow Dash must right the wrong she caused and save the whole city from the ones that want to ruin Equestria.
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Edited by: Xhoral1865 (First few chapters) & An-Twan Star
(This story is inspired by the game: Mirror's Edge by Dice and EA games.)
(Rated Teen for language and some adult themes)
(Cover art drawn by me. Not my best but, hey it's better than nothing right?)

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This story is a sequel to Treasured Moon and Stars: Vol. 1 Luna's Treasured Moon


The crew of the Fancy Flute is back and in peril already. Captain Scratch, thought to be alright, is slowly dying. Of what? That is what Octavia wants to find out. Octavia has to find a way to save Vinyl and she has to find the Elements of Harmony. But how can she find them when the other three elements were out of sight and the three she already found are bickering and not trusting each other?

Meanwhile, Vinyl is traveling between life and death. She finds a place where everypony lives in harmony, rich and poor, riff raff with the nobles. Vinyl faces her past head on and meets the one pony she lost. Even if she was reunited with the ones that were dear to her in the past, Vinyl thought of something that made her heart flip. Can she ever face Octavia, again and tell her about her true feelings for her?

The story takes a darker turn as more mysteries are revealed and the past reveals itself. Is it possible that Octavia might find the answers to who is really the true leader of Canterlot’s corrupted government? Can she save the Elements from themselves? What truth is Rainbow Dash trying to hide from Octavia? So many new questions and yet so little time for answers; can Octavia find the answers she seeks? Discover the answers for yourself in Volume 2 of the Treasured Moon & Stars trilogy.


Edited by: Xhoral1865
April 9th, 2014: Added the cover art. I drew it myself with PS. Hope you guys like it.

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After a terrible Civil War that segregated the three pony races, the galaxy became a terrible place. Earth Ponies and Hybrids (mixed ponies) are seen as dung under the hooves of the aristocrats. But after thirty years of turmoil ponies wanted it all to stop. But no side dares to back down. One day a princess was born that rocked the entire planet of Canterlot and the surrounding Equestrian Galaxy: an earth pony hybrid princess.

Sixteen years after her birth, Princess Octavia was always protected by her unicorn parents but that changed during her sixteenth birthday when the ship her family was on was attacked by pirates. A young thief by the name of Vinyl Scratch rescues Octavia from the blades of her attackers. Who’d ever thought that this meeting will change their lives forever?

Vinyl had dreams of becoming a rich merchant as Octavia dreams of bringing her people back from segregation. But how can these two fulfill their dreams when evil pirates, assassins, and aristocrats try to stop them at every turn? Adventure and treasure meet their sights as these two mares meet a college professor and her assistant with a clue that will lead them to the greatest legendary treasure of all time. They must find the legendary Luna’s Treasured Moon where Luna’s treasure rests, and the rumored burial ground of the Princess Explorer. But the only key to get there is Octavia’s necklace, The Luna’s Tear.


(This is a crossover between Treasure Planet, Castle in the Sky, and Ponies. It’s not really a crossover but you’ll recognize themes from both of these movies in the story.)

Jan. 4th, 2014 - Feb. 9th, 2014: TMS 1 has been edited.
Edited by Xhoral1865
March 4th, 2014: Replaced old Cover art with a new one. Drawn and painted by me. Hope you guys like it.
October 11th, 2014: TMS 1 turns 1 year old. I drew up a new cover art in celebration.

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It has been ten years since Octavia has seen her mare friend Vinyl Scratch since they parted ways for their careers. But when the cellist meets Vinyl again she noticed something was very off about her. It turned out her fears were true after receiving a call for help from the DJ. Only thing is that seeing Vinyl again just unlocked a hidden trail of a murderer. Octavia must find out who the pony is and what was his motive for hurting Vinyl. But sniffing around might lead to more trouble for both Octavia and Vinyl. She won’t be alone of course, she’ll have old friends helping her including, Lyra Heartstrings, Bonbon, Apple Fritter, Beauty Brass, Applejack, Rainbow Dash, Twilight Sparkle and Ditzy Doo.

Can Octavia and her friends uncover this murderer’s plot in time or will her efforts to save the mare she loved come too late?


(Edited by: Xhoral1865 & Roybgp)

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This story is a sequel to An Apple Scratch toward the World.


[Humanized] The past of Queen Chrysalis is finally unveiled:
The Young girl of the Slums of Maredrid became an orphan...
The Orphan became a slave because of a dishonorable man...
The Slave was rescued by a powerful organization...
The Organization formed her until she became the champion of Istalloña...
The Champion of Istalloña became its monster...
The Monster crowned itself Queen.

Apple Scratch Saga:
1: Apple Scratch toward the world (I recommend reading this one for a better understanding of Chrysalis' situation in the prologue)
2: A summer at the farm
3: Onward to the Equestria games
Bonus/World Building : Tales of Apple Scratch

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Celestia raises the sun every day, but it never gets boring. Not by a long shot.

This was a collab fic done by Fantasia Archsage (me) and Pump It Up a great friend of mine. Man, I really felt great doing this one.

Also, this fic has been edited by Xhoral1865, Hothead 112, and Jake The Dog. I know, Jake The Dog from Adventure Time, so freaking awesome! Anyhow, thank you all for reading this, please go give these people some follows and enjoy the story.

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Colonel Lyra Heartstrings is well known in the Hoofington space station as a hard, war torn mare. Even though she looked evil outside she has a big soft heart on the inside. That heart of hers can lead her to problems in the future if she’s not careful. This dangerous secret she kept for the last five years will kill her. A secret that can determine the fate of the Equestrian Galaxy.

Lyra has many secrets throughout her life but the worst of these secrets is one of the worst possible things that any pony in her station is capable of. She’s in love . . . with an earth pony. An earth pony mare, like Lyra, that just wanted to protect the children of Hoofington.

(This is a side story to Treasured Moon and Stars Volume 1. This story is set at a couple of days prior and right after the events of Chapters 11 & 12. It’s not required to read the story but it might be confusing. If you want to understand the back story then you must read the main story first to Chapter 12. The Sex tag was added just to be on the safe side.)


Edited by: Xhoral1865

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