What started off as a great day for Rainbow turns into the worst day for everyone. What if you were never told that someone you know was very sick until it was too late? What would you do if you found out that everything you did made their life better?

With the help of Mushious I was able to rework this into something better than before.

Pinkie Pie wants to know why everyone is feeling so down and has a feeling it revolves around Scootaloo. She drags Rainbow Dash along to try and figure out why the filly is being so distant to everypony. A troubling past leads to a better future.

Some secrets are best kept hidden. Celestia learns that the hard way when a ghost from her past comes to pay her a visit.

A special thanks goes out to Mushious for helping with edits.

Platinum Sword is a unicorn that was orphaned after a small band of dragons destroy the town he was born in. his mother did everything she could do to save him, and when a Captain of Canterlots Royal army saves him and decides to raise him himself Platinum's life gets to start now.

I would like some feed back on the story to see if its worth keeping up and continuing on. If it is I will send it to a friend to fix my horrible grammar but before that happens I would like to see if it is worth it.

Please don't be too cruel on comments but be truthful.