Platinum Sword is a unicorn that was orphaned after a small band of dragons destroy the town he was born in. his mother did everything she could do to save him, and when a Captain of Canterlots Royal army saves him and decides to raise him himself Platinum's life gets to start now.
I would like some feed back on the story to see if its worth keeping up and continuing on. If it is I will send it to a friend to fix my horrible grammar but before that happens I would like to see if it is worth it.
Please don't be too cruel on comments but be truthful.
I guess that means I have my work cut out for me
BEST ONE YET KEEP IT UP BRO AND MAKE THAT DESIGN SO I CAN MAKE US SOME TSHIRTS
3144119 glad you liked it XD
Really good story so far.
3189018 thank you. more to come at some point