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After an unavoidable incident it's time for everyone to say their final goodbye's. Rainbow Dash has trouble coping with the loss but after a some time and a new fan she pulls through stronger than ever.

This ties into Goodbye, Sweet Scootaloo tell me what you think.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 30 )

MOAR I SAY!!!!
MOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAR:fluttercry::flutterrage::fluttercry::flutterrage:
I award ye 7 out of 10 derpys
:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

3284826 more to come I promise. :scootangel:

That truly excellent to read can you make a squeal to this please.

3300370 I might be able to think of something glad u like it.:twilightsmile:

Please continue i love this story

The feels are choking me. :scootangel:

3389760 no dying please will continue on at some point... :twilightsmile:

:raritycry: ITS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!:fluttercry: and adorable at the same time!!!:rainbowkiss:

3399711 I will be attempting to continuing this story on. thanks to other people who would like me too. :raritywink::raritywink:

It made me cry:pinkiesad2:

3916628 imagine how it was to write it XD :scootangel:

This was wonderful, in the beginning, it had my feels ready to burst (I rarely cry, but this story, much like the prequel, had me on the verge of tears), then as it reached the end, I was smiling at the wonderful ending that was coming up. You have a great talent in channeling feels~

3956291 I am thinking of Sweetie Belle and Rarity story... but I still need to finish this one first. I also have a dark story and some other things I'm working on it.

3956414 Can't wait to read those when they are posted ^-^

Sniff I'm gonna need a moment. Ah screw it AHHHHHHHHHH SCOOTALOOOOO:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

4055251 its not finished yet... having a little bit of writers block with it but I hope to get back to it soon... glad u liked it

I think this was a perfect way to end the fic. Please don't write another chapter (but please name the school)

Never thought this would actually be relevant

name the school in memorium: :scootangel: May she shine a bright light on the school all the time and use her buzzing wings keep the breeze flowing past all of the students

4405825 never thought someone would not want me to finish the chapter... ok... apart from naming the Scholl Scootaloos School for gifted pegasi or something... I have nothing... why dont you name it if you want ^^

I would like this to be continued please. 2 chapters are not enough for this story.

5553933 not sure how much further to go.

4055251 I know i need a minute too. Damn I'm just gonna follow you. :fluttercry: :fluttershyouch::fluttershbad:

I liked the first chapter of this but I kinda felt like the second chapter was forced to much. I mean the first bit of the chapter was good but I don't know why I thought like she was just replacing Scoots almost as if there was an empty Scootaloo shaped hole in her heart and she tried filing it with something that just couldn't fit.Like putting a square into a circle or a corner puzzle piece in the middle. Just my personal opinion.

6265653 i have to admit it was kind of supposed to be like that... i had one more chapter in mind and i don't remember what it was supposed to be to be honest but it was going to tie everything together.

a wonderful read though the first chapter almost made me cry...

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