Be Advised...

Just a heads up, I’m about to nuter the hell out of this thing. Grinding out the muck in the first 3 chapters, condemning them into 1 by the end of it.

One single post on /mlp/ did a lot of “renovation” work for the story. Not directly of course, but it’s been another domino effect.

Printing out all 70 pages so far helps too. There’s just a mental block that I have with text on a screen. I’m more timid to change something types out that written out. It’s been lit up with more than a few splashes of red ink but at least it’s not for spelling errors.

Overall, there’s nothing that’s safe from the cringe-cutting-floor from this fic.

And until this point I haven’t honestly considerd the implications of a draft-like story changing up earlier chapters for someone who’s already read through it. Backtracking can’t be a good sign.

Also I subsist on criticism, which the lack of kinda got me stuck into this situation in the first place, so I’m open ears.

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[Alexthereader]

Still waiting